i just wrote this song was a quick 20minute thing and wanted to no what people thought of the lyrics. i'm looking for some honest constructive criticism here. thanks.
When you lie awake at night,
asking was it worth this fight?
just trying to recall
what it was that made us fall
to scared to move forward
but it hurts to much to stay
If someone gets too close,
you just try to struggle loose
where you stand alone
a mannequin to your emotions
recalling your depictions
of that happiness you used to feel
When you lie awake at night
pretending your alright
watching the caliginous sky
saying your final goodbye
to scared to move forward
but it hurts to much to stay
All the things i wanted to tell you
but just didn't know how to say
all the times i wanted to hold you
but just didn't know how to ask
all the times i wanted to help you
but just didn't know how
I just didn't know how
Wont you please tell me how...
wont you please just tell me how