Hi everyone. This is m first lyric post and also my first post on these forums. Good to be here.
So this is a song I wrote a few weeks ago. Tell me what you think.
Delivery
Ill never forget what you said
The day you flew away
With your travel bags and coffee mug
That'd last back to the USA
I said ill see you in a month or two
You just said that could be years for all you know
Now I wonder if you smiled at the time
You can say things you don’t believe
You can just lie to me
And I’ll wonder what you really mean
Not in the words but in the delivery
I’m sure you remember the day
We spent some time at the sea
And the waves got me all sentimental
I jumped the gun and said something stupid
And from there we slipped
My mouth is my worst enemy
If you knew how I cried at the time
I can say things the wrong way
I find it hard to make you see
And you’ll never know what I mean
Not in my words but in my melody
If home is just a place to keep the heart,
Let me be your place by the sea