Can someone help me?

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    hart716 said:

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    Can someone help me, by writing a song about a guy and a girl who slowly fall into a love that is not meant to be, with the chorus "I wanna die in your arms tonight."?


    Thanks. I have some creative issues on this subject and I need a little help. Dont worry, I'm not going to copy your song. I just want to hear your songs for inspiration. I will write my own after I get a few good ones posted and then I will post mine.

    Thanks guys.
     
  2. Rabbitdrive said:

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    I will do that!











    Later.
     
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    hart716 said:

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    Thanks, I had some ideas about it but none seemed to really work.
    I never wrote this kind of love song before, so it's a different approach for me.
    Thanks =D
     
  4. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Watch The World Collapse

    We all know the story,
    Of Romeo and Juliet,
    A love that wasn't meant to be,
    They were Montehues and Capulets,
    But forbidden love,
    Is a tasty, tasty, tasty fruit,
    And this is how it's meant to be,
    Just me and you...

    Short skirts,
    Splendiferous kneecaps,
    My accents gone all posh again,
    Slipping into a forbidden romance,
    I'll meet you later at our little den...


    I wanna die in your arms tonight,
    I want the world to collapse and hold us tight,
    The darkened corridors known as life,
    Would be lit up if you would be my wife.


    [Short Instrumental]

    Taking me away,
    Despite the legal proceeding,
    If we came from Adam and Eve,
    We're all interbreeding,
    I'll meet you once more,
    And we'll almost get together,
    I can see it in your eyes,
    You've got me on a tether.

    Short skirts,
    Splendiferous kneecaps,
    My accents gone all posh again,
    Slipping into a forbidden romance,
    I'll meet you later at our little den...


    I wanna die in your arms tonight,
    I want the world to collapse and hold us tight,
    The darkened corridors known as life,
    Would be lit up if you would be my wife.


    Be mine and watch reality crash,
    All around us - we can collect,
    The ashes of those that betrayed us,
    It's a stab wound through the heart,
    But I know that we must part,
    This love can't be...

    I wanna die in your arms tonight,
    I want the world to collapse and hold us tight,
    The darkened corridors known as life,
    Would be lit up if you would be my wife.


    I wanna die in your arms tonight (x4)
     
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    hart716 said:

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    I really like that.
    I've started my own, but its not going so well haha.
    It should be done tomorrow, so I'll get it up then.