My Last Goodbye

I can't really remember the last time I was on here, but that doesn't mean I haven't been working. Here's one that I've been working on for a little while. Feedback is appreciated.

One more time
I see this life
And decide
I don't know why
I can't hide.
My sorrows gone,
Born again,
New blood begun.

Chorus:
I've come four ways from nothing
To try to find something
Inside that's real,
Now the choices I've made
Are becoming my fate.
Is there nothing real?

No more times
Will I define
Who I am
By what's inside.
Only I will prove
My pride
And slay the fear
I must deny.

Nothing will stop me
For I can create a new
Destiny for myself,
Despite the limits set.
Nothing will hold me back,
Keep me from gaining faith.
Understand I won't die but
Spit on the things you say!

Chorus

Post-Chorus:
So now I stay behind.
This is my last goodbye.

Chorus

Post-Chorus X2

These lyrics in my opinion are really good, I especially like the chorus, you can relate to whats being said! I like the length of the verses as well, they are straight to the point not dressed up to much, which is good for this set of lyrics! Nice song I like it

Very nice lyrics. Everybody questions fate and reality, so people could really relate to them.