I Need Help With The Title!!

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  1. DonFortunato said:

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    This is a song about bands that freak out about downloading music, and yes I have a specific band in mind, and yes all of it is true, I got busted for downloading music.

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    Don't say I'm not loyal, cause thats not true
    You were my first punk show and I cheered for you
    I went to your next show with all my friends
    And we bought your t-shirts at the end

    We waited three hours after the show
    Without any jackets in a foot of snow
    Turns out you left in a different van
    Without meeting a single fan

    (Chorus)
    And I don't see nothing wrong
    With singing along
    To all my favorite songs
    And if I didn't buy it
    !t doesn't mean I haven't payed you
    All along I've been a fan
    You've always been one of my favorite bands
    And it should be enough that I played you

    Your second album was a piece of ****
    Did you really expect me to pay for it?
    I only kept one single track
    But your still asking for your money back

    (Chorus)

    (Bridge)
    And with the quality these days
    I pity the fool who pays
    Cause there's no reason for you to be rich
    When you act like such *****
    Ill spend my money on the little bands
    who give respect to all their fans

    (Chorus)

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    jw92 said:

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    tad grammar mistakes. but other than that pretty good.
    Please review and give feedback on my lyrics!
     
  3. DonFortunato said:

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    Ya looking back I really should have proof read it, thanks though