rainbow__xx

hey! this is my first post here but please don't be too nice! I'd really like to know what u think!

i hate it when people give up on their dreams, no matter what the reason is! So here's a song I wrote cuz i have big dreams. =)

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RAINBOW
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I'm chasin'
But I'm runnin' in circles, baby
And I'm shaken
By the casual way they say maybe,
baby

Please tell me,
Why do they give up when they've come so far?
Why aren't they
Why aren't they reachin for that risin' star
baby

You gotta stay strong
Never give up, never give up baby
Move along
Keep on, keep on, keep on, keep on dreamin'

They're cryin'
But cryin' don't get them nowhere
Implyin'
That yes I've done that been there
Baby

Life's not fair
But you know you gotta beat the odds
Don't be scared
You just gotta show 'em what you got
baby

You gotta stay strong
Never give up, never give up baby
Move along
Keep on, keep on, keep on, keep on dreamin'
Gotta stay strong
Never give up, never give up baby
Move along
Keep on, keep on, keep on, keep on dreamin'

And if the ground starts shakin'
You still got me
And if your spirit's breakin'
I'll set you free
Just keep on tryin'
Remember what I said
If the sky starts cryin'
Still got a rainbow over your head

You gotta stay strong
Never give up, never give up baby
Move along
Keep on, keep on, keep on, keep on dreamin'
Gotta stay strong
Never give up, never give up baby
Move along
Keep on, keep on, keep on, keep on dreamin'
Keep dreamin', keep dreamin'

Still got a rainbow over your head.


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I have a youtube and i'll sing it on there soon hopefully so maybe i could post a link not sure...

so yeah! Watcha think?

Hey I'd really like some opinions on this, it's never gotten a reply and I just got an e-mail from tbhis site and decided to check it out -- any advice?