Cursed To Love

Well.
I'm beginning to realize the hypocrisy
Seen truth crystalize in deficiency
Broke thru the disguise of apostasy
Remember when you asked
is it me behind the mask

Well...
Now you're alone in your sanctity
Pushing your own make-believe entity
Like last year, you throne the iniquity
But you call me names
You're too pure to be blamed?

When you needed me
I was always there
That's why I bleed
You were too cold to care

Bloody hell.
Is there an ounce of remaining normality
I'm renounced and cursed by banality
Nothing's the same as it used to be
Now excuses are stylish
And they get better mileage

When you needed me
I was always there
That's why I bleed
But you're too young to care?

Guess it just wasn't true when you said "I love you"
Otherwise you would rue what it's done to you
But I saw the denial when you took up the trial
With zombies who smile
In self-inflicted exile

When you needed me
I was always there
Just wish you could see
That I really did care ...

It kills me to see it wish you could defeat it
Learn how to read it so you won't repeat it
This give and take just puts off the date
I'm sick from our fate
Gotta reaffiliate

(background whisper)
with life
Stop the hate.

When you needed me
I was always there
I just want you to see
Wish I could take you back there

When ... you needed me
I was always there ...
I just want ... you to see
... wish we could go back

Awesome song! Everything flows so well and your rhymes are perfect. Very well done, I like it a lot =)

Hey thanks!! I don't even know what to say coz I wasn't sure at all how good it was. Thanks for taking the time and I'm uber-glad you like it

Very nice!
"With zombies who smile
In self-inflicted exile"
Loved that line. Keep up the good work!

Thanks so much!! Not sure if I could keep it up though, coz I really didn't want to write anymore like this. But when it's there, it's there. And I really appreciate your comments!

It's amazing. Simply amazing. But now you gotta come here and dry my tears, because this made me cry my heart out. And that's not good, because I have to meet my friends in a few minutes.

Angel, I hope you know that your opinion is always #1 with me. Thank you for the wonderful compliment! but I almost feel sick that it affected you that way. I can only hope a big e-hug will help my little sister in soul. <3

It is heartbreaking yet possesing a beauty of it's own. Your grammar and structure are very well put together, making it exceptional. Thank you for sharing.

Originally Posted by MoonRide42

Angel, I hope you know that your opinion is always #1 with me. Thank you for the wonderful compliment! but I almost feel sick that it affected you that way. I can only hope a big e-hug will help my little sister in soul. <3

Haha, yes it did. Anyways I still love the song

Nanashi I'm a grammar freak so thanks a lot for that. You and Angel, to get such compliments from two of the very best lyricists that ATL will ever see really means a lot to me. Thank you!

That is far too much of a title for me. I have only just joined and have not read what other lyricists have to offer. You included.

This is great, the words are great and everything just fits together. Nice job.

Thanks Mon, I appreciate that very much
Nanashi, granting that you're a relatively new member on this site, it seems obvious that you've got a natural talent that most of us can only dream of having. And I know I'm going to learn something important from you, because I really like your style.
I'll even say that everyone who has posted in this thread has a very well-developed "signature" that I appreciate, and I'm humbled by all the greatness that's been hovering around here

I just started looking on this forum and I'm glad I did. This is the second song I have read, and it is really good. The first one I read was good as well. Some great lyricists on this site, glad I joined. Look forward to seeing some more of your work! Perhaps I will post some of my own lyrics up before too long.