im 13 years old, but im starting to get into hip hop. i want some feedback about my lyrics, but i want an honest opinion from who ever reads this...
at this young age i've seen a lot of ****
so innocent but i know i shouldnt believe in politics
and dont trust anyone that im surrounded with
'cause they can knock you off your path, end your life
like they got you with a hollow tip
they could be plotting ****, and you dont even know it
j. cole said stay away from phonys, because they never show it
so i dont care if you know me, just know that im not one to be messed with
imma take whats mine, on some conquest ****
lurking in the shadows of fear, so you cant see me
gotta be bold though, speak out because the city needs me
im representing for all the real cats, that arent for
solving issues with gats
its okay if you wanna bash, if you dissagree with me
im just trynna get through to some heads, speaking discreetly
just know that i aint stopping spreading the word of my beliefs
the only thing possibly in my way, is fatigue
but at the moment im filled with energy
that should kill anyones hopes that this is the end of me
aint bothered by the people that envy me