One Last Kiss.

I try not to live in the past, But I can’t get past this…
I’m caught on an action, That temporary satisfaction
That caused this lasting reaction
We were 2, Me and You, But along the way we met subtraction
Fate would have its way, Sometimes it seems not worth the pay
But you were worth all the time
Now I’m thinking of you all the time
And I try not to live in the past, But I just can’t get past this,
I’m still stuck on that last kiss
When you fulfilled my last wish…

(And now
I can’t seem to get over being down like this
I just hope this same feeling doesn’t exist
For the other set of lips
That have the fond memory
Of that one last kiss)

One last kiss,
The one that I could continue to build a dream on
That one last kiss,
The one that any director could build a scene on
The scene to finish any sad movie that must end in heartbreak
And continues to remind the audience just how much heart-ache
One heart will take
When remembering that one last kiss…

How could that one last kiss
Have me feeling like this
If only that wasn’t my one last wish
Then I could wish back the girl
Who gave me that one last kiss…

But my wishes are all out
And now that one last kiss is all I think can about
The second greatest wish I could have come true, no doubt
And the only thing that keeps that statement a fact
Is that the first greatest wish would be to have you back

(And I just can’t seem to get over being down like this
I just hope this same feeling doesn’t exist
For the other set of lips
That have the fond memory
Of that one last kiss)

One last kiss, That was my one last wish,
It didn’t do what all I thought it would do
Though it did come true, and it blew me away too
Now I wish I could somehow just forget you
But my one last wish was spent on that one last kiss
And now I’m left remembering the lips
Of the one girl I miss.

Anything? Advice? Comments?

Hiya, it is quite good actually, worded well, but I think you use the words "one last kiss" too much. The three words are at the end of each verse and chorus, maybe limit it to only a couple times, apart from that, its good

Thanks! And yea, I see what you mean. I noticed it but let it slide, this is one of my rare songs where I repeat alot but that's how it came out.