Hey whats up, thanks for checking this out, i made corrections, switching around and im just looking for opinions! one of my good friends raps n does videos and stuff. nothing big he started a yr and half and all but we were chilling just flowing with eachother and now he wants me to do a verse on his song, so i was wondering what you guys thought about this one! be critical i dont care, im just looking for some feedback if i decide to do this flow for him. Thanks guys!
Im looking Forward never looking back, headed to the top thats right just a fact/
im looking forward to what the future brings, friends money cars champagne kind of things, or an athlete balling, striving for that ring/
got my crown i ll be the king, looking for my queen, Maybe be an actor you can see me on the screen/
but who knows what the future holds/ im just a college student going to school, education is the future my mama didnt raise a fool, just a kid headed to class, im only half full time to fill up that glass/
my dreams are up there but imma reach on higher, dont want to bring pain just want to bring fire, maybe my words will one day inspire and dreams is something i can conspire, determination and you cant stop my desire,/
yea im afraid but its not gonna stop me, like i said im chasing that ring, gonna get that gold dream team kind of thing, or imma get em' all Michael Phelps kind of thing, or imma get it fast at Usain Bolt speed/
i can do what i want cus im free, its all infront of me just open up and see, its in your hands and its in your dreams/
do a journey dont stop believing because and then you ll start wishing/
wishing on a star, wishing to be famous with cash and cars. Wishing at the primeres chillin with the stars, but thats just wishing and thats afar, now you're old washed up and chillin at the bar, you got ur a** kicked by life even got the scars, you wanna be a rockstar well wheres your guitar?/
just go for it, you have your dreams what you have to show for it?/
good thing about dreams is that your asleep, now wake up, go out and take that leap, take that chance before youre 6ft deep/
man life is a one time thing, come home rockin' that bling, cars cash children medals oscars and wedding rings/
whatever makes you happy in life, happiness is what i strive, pain is a b**** and it hurts like a knife, i know she out there my beautiful wife/
but im only 21yrs young and you wont forget me, i got it all, you know what i ll bring, i ll be the speaker of my generation kind of thing, and i wont stop til i get a fistful.....Kobe Bryant rings.
Copywright 09/19/2011
Let me know what you guys think! anything i would greatly appreciate it