Here's a drop i've been working on.

Not yet finished but i'd like some input.

These fools loading **** to their brains rapidly, call it rhapsody.
Intelligence going downhill by the days, what the ****s happening?
Every generation says the same about the next,
but we're in deep water to our necks.
They lack respect, I keep my head ahead with my intellect.
Heck, kid's are like bad American clones not kept in check.
lack their own chromosome, and just can't connect.
I try to stay unique, place me in my own deck,
They'll never reach me, ima spade of a hundred googleplex.
And they still dont know jack ****
While my brains just stacked with
Knowledge like a full house, you all need practice.

I wrote this to the NY State Of Mind Instrumental by Nas.

damn this verse is hot! you definitely killed it with the multiple syllable rhyming. the content of the verse was really good and smart, and i like how you rhymed at the beginning of your lines and not only in the endings like when you rhymed "clones, and chromosomes" in lines 6 and 7. dope verse, and props for writing over an illmatic beat.