Wordplay For Wow. Part 6.

Hope you enjoy it. Check my other writings too! Looking for tips or feedback on any of it. Haven't received anything.

The pad is my canvas, Watch my pen paint that
You could catch me wearing a Saints shirt with a Saints cap
And I’m all about my green like Saint Pat
One man show no need for the team-play
I just have to write it, Yea I write it this clean way
Are you some dummy? 4-20 isn’t my only Green Day
I wanna be anything but an American idiot
Scenes from dreams with nice things
I hope to one day be livin’ it
Constipation nation… nobody gives a ****
Every mans ambition is lost within his wishin’ to get a *****
Pardon my language, I meant get a chick
Like birdie have you heard me, You must be fly to deserve me
I only want her if she’s sexy
Give her my number to text me
To her I’m the most interesting man, damn, Flow so Dos Eques
Flow is Nike shop hot, Come check me,
I’m so far from the basics
Computer minded, welcome to my matrix
Try to take this and not hate this
But my pen can **** up the pad like a rapist, watch it rape this
You should tape it
Wordplay for wow or is it lyrical porno’s?
I’ve got good delivery and everyone else is so Digiornos
Cream of the crop but I’d never get corn rows
Always brainstorming, This is that perfect storm flow
So gone that sometimes I tell my brain bye
I’m insane fly, I could even catch a hurricane’s eye
Man I’m a trip, far from a stumble
I write it to perfection but I know I should stay humble
I’m too bright, I could be the light, At the end of your tunnel
“And that’s just how the cookie crumbles”
As I sign off like Bruce Almighty
I mean with random **** like that who could out write me?
I mean, who could even try to do it like me?
I don’t even need drugs, This flow is an art fix
On your mark, get set, Just don’t go and start ****
Like now now, this is that Wordplay for Wow
Part 6.

I have no idea why your lyrics get no reviews.
I really liked everything you've posted so far !
Keep it coming !

sum good stuff goin here

Thank you! I'm just trying to improve. Anything anyone notices I will try to improve on.
I enjoy finally getting some responses though!

The only remark that I have is that you should try to use more multi's. Not only at the end of your sentence, but also in the beginning of your sentence, and in the middle, etc. That way, it will flow even better.
You already have a very good content in mind, so rhyming should be easy for you.

Yes thank you I will keep that in mind! Always looking to improve.