_SBU -vs- AyeYoItsKarma

Originally Posted by AyeYoItsKarma

battle any body?
check in if you would like to battle with me
HOUSE RULES
no flipping 24 hour dead line after check in
first one to check in battles me and if there's
a list or a variety of people wanting to battle then
i'll get at you as well keep it short and simple
8 bars and for those who don't know what eight bars are
-_- there basically 8 LINES ONE LINE IS CONSIDERED ONE BAR
THERE FORTH 8 BARS,8 LINES keep it short and simple just to get things heated up
so basically four bars eight lines i guess in "text form" i guess but 24 hour dead line after check in
just say CHECK write your verse i'll get to it NO FLIPPIN good luck to anybody battling peace

check...

you Lack swagger mate, you're a bland rapper Aye,
I'mma go over heads but you're banned-an'-afraid.
If it's time to pass the ratchet.. I'mma find the part that's damaged;
I'll Break it down; ..take him out like I'm a Kar-ma-chanic.
Quit life kid, though bust a rhyme quick.
If I Flip..Mo'd undersign it.
you're Hated for plenty.. take it more steady..
I'd Nameflip this fake pr*ck but fate did already.

Banned an afraid- he was banned from the site.
bandana freyed- whilst my lines 'go over heads'- complex.
ratchet- gun or wrench.
/part that's damaged/break it down- 'Car mechanic/ Karmachanic'
If I Flip 'Mo'd undersign: 'Mo' ref: another rapper here which K was rude to, so she'd agree. +
'Flipmode' undersign- 'busta rhymes' label.
nameflip/fate did- Karma.

Originally Posted by _SBU

you Lack swagger mate, you're a bland rapper Aye,
I'mma go over heads but you're banned-an'-afraid.
If it's time to pass the ratchet.. I'mma find the part that's damaged;
I'll Break it down; ..take him out like I'm a Kar-ma-chanic.
Quit life kid, though bust a rhyme quick.
If I Flip..Mo'd undersign it.
you're Hated for plenty.. take it more steady..
I'd Nameflip this fake pr*ck but fate did already.

Hahaha good **** kar-ma-chanic. But check your standers you called this kid out and wrote this slander?
Ima slam ya, because I ****in can,
Oops pardon my language your just forcing my hand
Come with more than "bland" that insult was just what it said.
I'm miles and miles away but can feel your face gettin red.
You're just a peg on my ladder I'm gettin fatter while you demise
I'm feeding you insults but yet you want a compromise.
Un-fixate your eyes check your website for some better punch lines

Still Born Unicorn

when the ratchets out the gadget sounds like clappin rounds i'll hit this faggots mouth and SMOKE this SQUARE alone so no one would see this *** AROUND!
this maggot shouts,have em down, LETS BEEF? you a TEXTCEE that aint nothing to BRAG ABOUT!
think he's best? PLEASE REST! this weak threat will sleep dead cut his knees,neck,teeth,VEST,when these send have your mom RECEIVE THEM
strike his mouth and wipe em down cus we know your raps are **** still born YOU/U B.S.
quit fussin yah ***** yah lungs rippin quick,i'll put the SILENCED METAL to his mouth so this DUMBS SIPPIN CLIPS
still born unicorn lol why in the **** am i battling somethin that DOESN'T EXIST

bleh bleh i only did three bars on purpose ;/
you can accept that or just disqualify me
or sbu you can just have the win if you'd want
i honestly didn't try this whole text battling
just isn't meh any more ;/ i do audio battles
or live battles so my touch in text battlin
has fallin off good **** tho one of the strongest
name flips i have seen good **** bruh peace

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Hahaha good **** kar-ma-chanic. But check your standers you called this kid out and wrote this slander?
Ima slam ya, because I ****in can,
Oops pardon my language your just forcing my hand
Come with more than "bland" that insult was just what it said.
I'm miles and miles away but can feel your face gettin red.
You're just a peg on my ladder I'm gettin fatter while you demise
I'm feeding you insults but yet you want a compromise.
Un-fixate your eyes check your website for some better punch lines

You're a pitiful rhymer with minimal style, this isn't a cipher; I'll break you like code though.
I'm so dope my own clones've cloned clones, you've no hope.
I usually do dirt.. it's proven the moves hurt..
I'll make Smooth's crew break like the music of Kool Herc.
Mine surpass a higher class from lessons learned like Columbine.
Monsterlike.. ostracised.. but yes I do want "compromise"..
Swap the common lines for stronger rhymes..
Drop a proper try.. or.. not reply.

I never been one to hide so yes here's my proper try,
I get **** on and come back stronger with poise every time.
I check my stash for a better rhyme collect my flow and hit my hash,
find my rythm knock you off your feet with heat of mine.
Feen my lines. Ill take your dirt ... show you how weee bang it,
want the top spot? Best progress before weee claim it
I'm prone to seee riches.... and take your clones
make em listen to commands extinguish you future Holmes

you're barely astute and you're rarely as smooth
and you've got poor-"poise" like aquariums do.
my words and wit deserve the win for certain kid, you're worst at this.
you only "hit the hash" if moving units on some qwerty sh*t.
sit alone and simmer though..
"hit the hash"? ..#twitter posts?
you really believe that we "feen" for your scripts?
as you speak about "heat" I'll Prometheus it.

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[EDIT:]
poor poise / porpoise.

I scare you like merits do let competition embarrass you,
I inherit jewels and get king pins to pay their dues.
Matter of fact you shoul too, get a clean slate,
Make some new assumptions or suffer a mean fate.
I increase the crime rate increasingly, deceiving see?
My wordplay is unheard eh? Now See what they see??
They call me hoyce Gracie my jaws crazy
I can take a key of cane on a plane being lazy

damn gents...nice stuff...

Originally Posted by smoothtung

I scare you like merits do let competition embarrass you,
I inherit jewels and get king pins to pay their dues.
Matter of fact you shoul too, get a clean slate,
Make some new assumptions or suffer a mean fate.
I increase the crime rate increasingly, deceiving see?
My wordplay is unheard eh? Now See what they see??
They call me hoyce Gracie my jaws crazy
I can take a key of cane on a plane being lazy

"lazy".. maybe coz you're a-pathetic rapper.. and ya
wack generic patterns lack effective angles, standard..
grammar on some student tip.
not a vet yet new-ter this.

I'm a real wordsmith on a fieldwork shift,
you lack force, I snap "jaws" like spielberg did.
you suck. true but.. "Smoothtung" flips.. fact.
I dropped rough sh*t, you just licked *ss.


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a pathetic /apathetic (as in apathy).. re: "lazy"
vet[eran] / vet[erinarian].. so..
new to this / neuter this.. re: 'generic'

lmfao this battle cyphers getting hectic lmao

Karma I'm with ya it's getting crazy....dawg.

Originally Posted by _SBU

"lazy".. maybe coz you're a-pathetic rapper.. and ya
wack generic patterns lack effective angles, standard..
grammar on some student tip.
not a vet yet new-ter this.

I'm a real wordsmith on a fieldwork shift,
you lack force, I snap "jaws" like spielberg did.
you suck. true but.. "Smoothtung" flips.. fact.
I dropped rough sh*t, you just licked *ss.


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a pathetic /apathetic (as in apathy).. re: "lazy"
vet[eran] / vet[erinarian].. so..
new to this / neuter this.. re: 'generic'

You shoulda passed. You cracked. Its my task to laugh at your weak ***.
Your quick wit I'm fast. Blastin ya like a speedbag
You feen shwag you need swag I bleed mags and leave tags
You use words to big for your britches I kept it clean as....
Lysol.
Its not my fault you chose to fall,
keep my flow long as a hall. You come off my **** and withdraw.
I'm a south paw with a mean face, go three round with a heavy weight
Been known to sport a clean taste and resort to freebase
I don't clean plates, I eat. Stomach **** like a king.
My lyrics are know to sting, best fear it. I'm growing wings

Sh*t yo, slick bro.. sick flow, script's pro..
but only the first half- the part where you hit [Quote].

you "bleed mags and leave tags"?
I breathe rap and sneeze slang,
my rhymes shine like sword blades or solar flare's force tamed,
you "southpaw" I'm polarbear known to tear northface.
so you're "fast" an "southpawed" an you're down to fight "three"? b*tch,
...after round four you'll be bound to I.V drips.


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northface= popular cold weather clothing. ref: "southpaw".. polar bear (north.. paw)
round four // i.v drip (introvenus medication) ref: 4=IV (in numerals).

What's Sk'n been up to? Who? you know the guy...
The black clouds hovering over you! You know... the storm before your eyes.
Rhymes striking with lighting, brings thunder to the bout.
Ain't no doubt to the rules. most battles end with lights out.
Erase **** like white out ,crucify life like cows.
Milking it for all it's worth, Okay enough!! going back to the grind now!!
Make hamburger meat with emcees all do respect to those who've faced me.
To Karma SBU and Smooth...tag your it. chase me..you know who's Waiting...

My rhymes ignite hottest, like- if the "lights off" it'S..
Cayenne Deep in ya missing 'i's socket.
Sk'n 'deep'? ..six feet, forcefed insecticide.
I'mma big league blitzkrieg all them defensive lines.
"tag your it"?? ..sh*t, that was child's talk.
I'mma tag over yours though, like I'm Cap from Stylewars.
why not sign off? "peace love empathy".
Im a wolf, these sheep come endlessly.

[QUOTE=_SBU;909330]Sh*t yo, slick bro.. sick flow, script's pro..
but only the first half- the part where you hit

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you "bleed mags and leave tags"?
I breathe rap and sneeze slang,
my rhymes shine like sword blades or solar flare's force tamed,
you "southpaw" I'm polarbear known to tear northface.
so you're "fast" an "southpawed" an you're down to fight "three"? b*tch,
...after round four you'll be bound to I.V drips.


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northface= popular cold weather clothing. ref: "southpaw".. polar bear (north.. paw)
round four // i.v drip (introvenus medication) ref: 4=IV (in numerals).

Nice one son, shits insane. But what bout sword blades?
You Rep northface? Sean Jean. You pack a poor taste

You sneeze slang?
What's ta say but blow your nose mang.
Make up your own **** and call it your own game
Half the words I use I make up I'm already there
Its Round 5 kid and I ain't lookin at a polar bear
I'm Nicky ****in k from the bay but rap in Dallas
Slangin more snow than ski slopes its just a habit
Come back with a tragic attempt to ****in slap it
The titles lookin fine in my site.... I'm guna grab it

Originally Posted by SK'nDeep

What's Sk'n been up to? Who? you know the guy...
The black clouds hovering over you! You know... the storm before your eyes.
Rhymes striking with lighting, brings thunder to the bout.
Ain't no doubt to the rules. most battles end with lights out.
Erase **** like white out ,crucify life like cows.
Milking it for all it's worth, Okay enough!! going back to the grind now!!
Make hamburger meat with emcees all do respect to those who've faced me.
To Karma SBU and Smooth...tag your it. chase me..you know who's Waiting...

What's up? You done ceised and ran out of words?
I spit preticates, pronouns, and adverbs.
Your absurd,
that fact you think you're good's got me concerned.
You erase ****? How bout everything I just ****in heard.
Your typings a waste of motion, taste my potion
I snap more mother ****in jaws than Billy ocean,
Quote it.
Note it. And get ahold of your game
Don't try so hard good raps can be plain.

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Nice one son, shits insane. But what bout sword blades?
You Rep northface? Sean Jean. You pack a poor taste

You sneeze slang?
What's ta say but blow your nose mang.
Make up your own **** and call it your own game
Half the words I use I make up I'm already there
Its Round 5 kid and I ain't lookin at a polar bear
I'm Nicky ****in k from the bay but rap in Dallas
Slangin more snow than ski slopes its just a habit
Come back with a tragic attempt to ****in slap it
The titles lookin fine in my site.... I'm guna grab it

Telling me to "blow the nose"? ..when blows are thrown you're comatose,
A focussed pro; I owned the posts. you overdosed;
I'm potent dope like 'polar' snow ..so..
I draw metal.. most corrode.

Straightjacket rap style... due 'props' for "insane",
you're envying my "sword" like you gotta switch blade.
I've clashed with assassins, if pigs stop I'm fed narcs
so "tragic" like ham lit and prints got ya den marked.


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~potent dope- clean like polar snow..
+polar(-magnetic).. so.. draw metal (/pull a weapon)

~gotta switchblade/ gotta switch blade= got a smaller sword/ got to swap swords.

~'fed'/narcs (police/pigs) so 'ham' lit/ cooked
+hamlet- (tragedy) 'prince' of 'Den'mark'.
+prints got ya den marked.. ref: 'assassins'.