(All Out) Battle* All welcome to join

wat you talkin about you givin in you're rhymes sucked

hahaha , Everyone always forgets that One love at somepoint and time gonna come round
Think that I give a fukk better watch who ya' talk about
I live to rap rough so foreva they know who I is before I'm out
Yo son , mother fukka like me own the crown
Oh what little coc* sucka's wouldn't know I run my town
Spitting faster then an automatic gun 3 strikes and next one up , You're out.
One love got it going on so now you lust what I bring when I'm around

"Damn 1luv you gotta way to make to me move"

It's cause you love what I say but me I got no time to lose

"Yeah but you can relax cause you rap so goooooood"

Yeah , I live that life
I spit it like I got 9 lives
Now got 8 , 1 to the mother fu*king mic

hahah , but if you think ->RAP<- to HGP's level
In a blink I show you that you can only write and you know me as real fukking rebel
You think you da sh*t , You just plain out stink and I'm x10 better.
See you're girl wink I don't react and that bitc* is already wetter

Come on at me mother fukkas , I'm done so let's see who can rap with roughest
Round me area I'm known literally as the toughest , Don't Fuc* with me cause I could leave you dead after I bust itttttttt.

Originally Posted by Deleterious

wat you talkin about you givin in you're rhymes sucked

Does anyone else agree?

Originally Posted by HomeGrownProduction

hahaha , Everyone always forgets that One love at somepoint and time gonna come round
Think that I give a fukk better watch who ya' talk about
I live to rap rough so foreva they know who I is before I'm out
Yo son , mother fukka like me own the crown
Oh what little coc* sucka's wouldn't know I run my town
Spitting faster then an automatic gun 3 strikes and next one up , You're out.
One love got it going on so now you lust what I bring when I'm around

"Damn 1luv you gotta way to make to me move"

It's cause you love what I say but me I got no time to lose

"Yeah but you can relax cause you rap so goooooood"

Yeah , I live that life
I spit it like I got 9 lives
Now got 8 , 1 to the mother fu*king mic

hahah , but if you think ->RAP<- to HGP's level
In a blink I show you that you can only write and you know me as real fukking rebel
You think you da sh*t , You just plain out stink and I'm x10 better.
See you're girl wink I don't react and that bitc* is already wetter

Come on at me mother fukkas , I'm done so let's see who can rap with roughest
Round me area I'm known literally as the toughest , Don't Fuc* with me cause I could leave you dead after I bust itttttttt.

Welcome back HGP

HGP

Is that it, just the 'drips' from a 'd1ck'
I'm a Homophobic so you better lose sh1t quick
See you go hoes before bros a 'D1cks move'
'White rappers'? I 'consume' their defeats like 'vacuums'
'Bust it' You 'bust' the 'choads bucket'
my advice? 'dump it'
'Who you about' the 'sh1t's rapper' covers You're 'cloud'
You yell HELP so 'loud' the whole town bust your a*s out
HGP HomeGrownPenis 2 inch is all you're about

Originally Posted by shaadow

..also I started writing when I joined the sight in October. You can improve quickly if taking advantage of your opportunities..

I'm all in if it's "(All Out) Battle".
I've raised the steaks and torn down cattle.
"take advantage of opportunities"?
..the way you grasp it and rob them musically?
coz- woah, your flow's so reminiscent of Smoothtung's.
you dragged that name through the mud. don't do the same with your new one.
I'd never rate the escapades.
you bite my lines then change your name to get away.
you should've just shown the proper restraint.
you can only switch an alias, the conscience remains.
you're still the same, bringing more of your shallow script.
so I guess all the times I beat Smooth were foreshaadowing.

btw 'Who' wasn't about you Who just so you know

sbu who did better me or shadow in this?

Haha nice to see you back sb

Ight deleterious , To start you're name reminds me of a cartoon character everytime I hear it
You rap like you're so hard but from me to you , never will I fear it
Something bout you talking bout white *** rapper , Bet in person you don't even know how to rap and that's the fact of matter
Hah , I'm glad to show em all how I'm known as the baddest
You think you're bad I'm known as a prophet that's the fact of it
Procede to ***** and whine like the rest and ONE LOVE shows you your lack of it
To be the best you gotta beat the best so let me show how many verses I'm #1 when I'm done when I rap it.

B1TCH call the COPS ima BEAT you’re A*S NONSTOP
A one sided battle from the start I fu*k you're MOTHER WHILE YOU WATCH
What the f*ck you doing looking at my CROTCH
You c*ck block a d1cks shot, you're equal to a d1cks snot
A B1tch rots, you've picked a pricks got
Fishing you get the SPERM of the Whale caught
You call you're stuff good all I hear is 'IT'
A prophet of d1ck I agree you 'DUMBSH1T'

Dude use words other than it

I think hgp got you there. You've got a crude distortion of your own self image. Check that...

lol sayin im a cartoon isn't a real diss to me other than that he says how could he is but he does not diss me

Originally Posted by Deleterious

sbu who did better me or shadow in this?

well I can't say who did better. it's all down to different styles and tastes.
I did prefer 'shaadow's drop, but I don't think it really matters who prefers which.
I think that either way the difference in your skill levels isn't all that hugely wide, and neither of you should be insulting the other's abilities outside of your battle drops. again that's just my opinion though.

This is a test run
call that shxt that crash dummy
run into a wall
then ask ! IS IT THAT FUNNY ?

Why the fxck you laughing ?
What the fxck you looking at ?
i'll fold yo axx up
then place you on my cooking mat

cooking mat ?
COOKING MAT !

put you in my pan
add that dragonball sauce
have you screaming like a saiyan

Welcome to my Hell Kitchen
catch me on TV
but you blind to the truth
so you can tag along with Stevie

better yet catch me on the broadcast
stay connected with the boss
you don't even need a hall pass

cause rapper like you
never fail to fall FAST!!!!!

With out the help of a master
Kunfu shxt
have your skills flipping backwards
( I gotta go I'll hit yall up later )

Bro, you don't use words correctly... I mean I've yet to see one verse that's completely gramatically correct.
And you have no creativity in your rhymes nor do you know how to display imagery or convey messages. I guess you need to want more out of your pieces. It's like your settling for one sylobal words, and the first ones to pop onto your head...

'What the f*ck you doing looking at my CROTCH You c*ck block a d1cks shot, you're equal to a d1cks snot'

What is that? What does it mean? Pretty weak..
And your text two ending rhymes ; "it is" and "dumbshit" ..don't really rhyme. And certainly not how you end a script.
In my opinion the ending is the most important, and should be the strongest

It wasn't my word of rhyming. I wouldn't have rhymed if I hadn't put "it" ...................I'm a man who rhymes in phrases why you stuck back in 1 word rhyming. get with the program.

you're a little right i am bad with ending and wat pops in my head but i still think i did better read the line above that line and it will make sense

post again i'll kill you without one syillables

No you won't. You haven't come close to my level once