Hani Metwasi - 2albi 2ablak tah

Hi,

I need help to correct my translation. I'm not sure that all the words were translated correctly and not even they are not misspelled.I had to make a lot of guesses. Anyway here it is :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FFImh-p8w0M

قلبي قبلك تاه
Alby 2ablak tah
My heart before you was confuse and anxious

لما قبلك داب
Lamma 2ablak dab
It melted when met you

داب وداق الحب وناره
Dab w da2 el7oubb w narou
It melted and tasted love's hell

عذابه دا احلى عذاب
3azabou da a7la 3azab
But its torment is the sweetest of all

أهواك بنهار وليل
2ahwak binahar w leyl
I love you day and night

دا المنى في اماني اتسلب حضنك وقليل
Da almouna f 2amani tsalab 7oudnak w 2aleel
My hope for being in safety is to robe an embrace of yours a few



يانا من لياليك والحنين لعينيك
Yana men layaleek w el7aneen la3ayneek
I'm from your nights and the longing for your eyes

دول خدوني عيشوني وموتوني فيك
Doul khadouni 3ayshouni w mawetouni feek
They made me to live and die inside of you



كل ثانية معاك يعلى فيًّ هواك
Kull thania ma3ak ya3la fiya hawak
every second with you increases your love inside of me

ياأغلى مني كل همي ياحبيبي رضاك
Ya 2aghla meni kull hammi ya 7abeebi ridak
Oh more precious than me, my only worry is your happiness

First I'd like to correct and add some lines in the lyrics...

وكتير وكتير قليل أهواك بنهار وليل
ده المنى ابقى انا مية سنة بحضنك.. وقليل

Only one correction in traslation, which is the word يانا
This word is like ياويلي, honestly I don't know what is its best transltion but I know it means woe me

Originally Posted by Oriee

First I'd like to correct and add some lines in the lyrics...

وكتير وكتير قليل أهواك بنهار وليل
ده المنى ابقى انا مية سنة بحضنك.. وقليل

Thank you Oriee

So could I translate them as :

وكتير وكتير قليل
W ikteer w ikteer 2aleel
And very very much and a little bit more

أهواك بنهار وليل
2ahwak binahar w leyl
I love you by day and night

ده المنى ابقى انا مية سنة بحضنك.. وقليل
Da almouna ab2a ana mit sana bi7oudnak w 2aleel
I wish I remained in your embrace for 100 years and a little bit more

Originally Posted by Oriee

Only one correction in traslation, which is the word يانا
This word is like ياويلي, honestly I don't know what is its best transltion but I know it means woe me

Could it be translated as :

يانا من لياليك والحنين لعينيك
Yana men layaleek w el7aneen la3ayneek
Poor me/woe is me! The nights and the longing for your eyes

دول خدوني عيشوني وموتوني فيك
Doul khadouni 3ayshouni w mawetouni feek
Have made me to live and die inside of you

Another question :

Could you explain to me those verbal forms عيشوني وموتوني ? I've never seen them before. I suppose they are in EA .right ?

Thanks again

Originally Posted by Oriee

First I'd like to correct and add some lines in the lyrics...

وكتير وكتير قليل أهواك بنهار وليل
ده المنى ابقى انا مية سنة بحضنك.. وقليل

Hi Orie,

I was listening this song and to be honest I hear sth different (but I am not native speaker)
and I found also another translation
Can you re-listen it again ,please.?
وكتيروكتيرأنين أهواك بنهار وليل
ده منهى بقلامي بسلام حضنك وقليل

- In fact
كتير قليل means قليل جدا but in dialect we replace جدا with كتير
It'll be: very few

- ده المنى ابقى انا مية سنة بحضنك.. وقليل
In fact this sentence has sth deleted at the end yani it should have been وقليل هذا if it was written in Fus7a, so the 100 years are not enough/ the 100 years are not much, few.

- عيشوني وموتوني :
May be because they are dialect
(May be in Fus7a another synonyms like قتل وأحيا)
They are used for plural yani the wow و in both words is for making pl.
If using in sig. it'll be حبك عيشني وموتني.
If you want to say that some people made you suffer you'll say هدوك الناس عيشوني في عذاب أو موتوني قهر (God forbid yani).

Let me know if they aren't clear yet.

@ CZAREK2581 :
I did re-listen to it for you.
Yes I know that lines are not clear at first, but thank God they are repeated over and over because I couldn't reconize what he was saying in the first time of the song... Try listen to them carefully in the 2nd and last time.

Originally Posted by Oriee

- In fact
كتير قليل means قليل جدا but in dialect we replace جدا with كتير
It'll be: very few
Let me know if they aren't clear yet.

shoukran iktheer w iktheer ya Oriee but I guess I didn't understand your explanation. How would you translate those verses ?

وكتير وكتير قليل أهواك بنهار وليل

According your explanation it would be translated as : I love you by day and night very few. But it doesn't make sense for me.

Last question (again) : could I say shoukran w nuss ?

Bye

Al 3fw, I did nothing ))

- It seems that he want more that one day time and one night time in one full day...
or may be he says
or I love you day and night and that is few for you... يعني قليل عليك... أنت بتستاهلي أكتر من هيك

- Yes, why not w nuss, o nusein, 3 nsas, whatever you want

Originally Posted by Oriee

Al 3fw, I did nothing ))

- It seems that he want more that one day time and one night time in one full day...
or may be he says
or I love you day and night and that is few for you... يعني قليل عليك... أنت بتستاهلي أكتر من هيك

- Yes, why not w nuss, o nusein, 3 nsas, whatever you want

Shoukran ikteer w alf nouss