Crimson Regret (really dark...)

This was supposed to be a poem, and a dark one but it turned into a song
I don't really know where it came from, I guess it's another well-hidden side of me (or I've been watching A Haunting too much lately)

A stain of blood on her white dress
On her knees, there she stands
Black mascara streaming down her face
She reaches out her hands

Her skin is slowly losing color
As she awaits her death
Her body’s slowly getting colder
She stops to take a breath

Ebon wavy hair, just like her
On her back, falls like rain
Completely lost in a world of hurt
He’s the cause of the pain

Crimson regret, bloodshot eyes
Staring at her love’s grave, she doesn’t dare to blink
Every single piece of her heart dies
Wishing she found another way to think
Crimson regret, hidden cries
For one more day with him, she would give anything

She can’t know they are only few steps apart
So close, but like always, too far away for touching
The sound of her steps echoes in his heart
She wishes he would be there watching
He was…

Crimson regret, bloodshot eyes
Staring at her love’s grave, she doesn’t dare to blink
Every single piece of her heart dies
Wishing she found another way to think
Crimson regret, hidden cries
For one more day with him, she would give anything

She loses her balance and falls
But too proud to stay down
On the strong feet of her naked soul
She dares to fake a frown

She couldn’t stand up for too long
She crumbles down again
The devil already sings his song
She knows this is the end

But with the last powers that she’s got
She tears the dress she wore
And she mumbles “what was mine, it’s not.
This gown belongs to her”

He regrets crimson, he hadn’t spoken
He thought it can’t be her, the one that’s in the grave
Every single piece of his heart’s broken
Someday he’ll know that she could’ve been saved
Crimson regret, wounds wide open
For one more day with her, he would give anything

I actually really like your lyrics you know even though Im more of a rap guy

I'll go even further. Angel, you write the most incredible lyrics that I've ever read from one person. Most of the time I browse this part of the forum just to see what you've written. Everything you write incites some feeling in me or pulls something out of me. This seems a pathetically shallow thing to say, but thank you my friend.

Thanks It really means a lot to me to know that someone likes the way I write
And by the way, I got an opportunity to record a few original songs, so soon enough you'll see how they sound!