Yagoda malina / Ягода малина - Zhasmin / Жасмин

Может помнишь тот сказочный сон,
Позабыт он тобой или нет,
Плыл над полем малиновый звон,
Занимался малиновый свет.

Ягода-малина нас к себе манила,
Ягода-малина летом в гости звала,
Как сверкали эти искры на рассвете,
Ах, какою сладкой малина была.

Тихо лес шелестел колдовской,
Лишь для нас пели в нем соловьи,
И малиною спелой такой
Пахли теплые губы твои.

Ты мне слово одно повтори,
Над которым не властны века.
И пускай от сиянья зари
Вновь малиновой станет река

Может помнишь тот сказочный сон,
Позабыт он тобой или нет,
Плыл над полем малиновый звон,
Занимался малиновый свет.

maybe u remember that magic dream
whether u forgot it or not
raspberry chime was flowing over field
raspberry dawn was breaking

Ягода-малина нас к себе манила,
Ягода-малина летом в гости звала,
Как сверкали эти искры на рассвете,
Ах, какою сладкой малина была.

raspberry was attracting us
raspberry was inviting us
how these sparkles were glittering
oh how sweet raspberry was

Тихо лес шелестел колдовской,
Лишь для нас пели в нем соловьи,
И малиною спелой такой
Пахли теплые губы твои.

magic forest was quietly rustling
nightingales were singing only for us
and your warm lips
were smelling of ripe raspberry

Ты мне слово одно повтори,
Над которым не властны века.
И пускай от сиянья зари
Вновь малиновой станет река

say to me the word again
centuries have no power over it
let river become raspberry-colored
from shining of dawn

Uhm I have another translation but it seems to be different from yours. I know this is so impolite, but please tell which one it more exactly?

Have you remembered that fabulous dream
Have you remembered or forgotten it
The dawn is raising and refreshing the fields
The bells rang over the fields

Refrain:

Raspberry,it’s sparkling and inviting us
In the summer,we come toghether under the raspberry tree
Sparkling like a burning flame rose up in the sunshine
How sweet the raspberry was,like your lips
The forest was quietly,the leaves were singing with peace
The nightingales were singing (only) for you and for me
Your warm lips,it’s so sweet like smelling of ripe raspberry
One more time(say to me)
We will never forget this moment
Let the river become sparkling and red like raspberries’s color from the shining of dawn
A bright crimson hues like the ripe raspberries.

the translation u've found is not exact. for example, the lines "The dawn is raising and refreshing the fields", "we come together under the raspberry tree" do not exist in the lyrics.

yes,the second is not exact 100% but it's more romantic than the first one and acceptable.This song is very nice and i heard it long time ago

@a.chumankov: your name is Alexei Chumankov,isn't it?
In my opinion, i prefer the 2nd translation has been found by alamandabud.

I just want the exact translation, though it is more romantic but not what the song want to say. Maybe the second is just internal opinion of translator

Originally Posted by xavihernandes

@a.chumankov: your name is Alexei Chumankov,isn't it?
In my opinion, i prefer the 2nd translation has been found by alamandabud.

Off-topic:=)),call me everything as u wish.... maybe you're from Spain(Barcelona) ?
On-topic : a vote for 2nd translation))-it's just MO