She Was Just In The Way

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    LyricsAngel said:

    Default She Was Just In The Way

    I can’t believe what I’m hearing
    Is it actually true?
    Is she talking ‘bout you?
    God, tell me this is just a confusion
    But I’m afraid it’s not…

    You cannot know what I’m feeling
    So please don’t say you can
    Oh, it happens again
    I want to believe it’s an illusion
    Please don’t tell me it’s not

    -Chorus-
    Cause she was just in the way…when you said you and me is wrong
    Maybe she was just in the way…all along
    She was just in the way and I hope she still is
    In the way of you fulfilling your dreams
    But she is, because your dream is cheating, so what can I say
    When it comes to that, there will always be a ‘she’ in the way

    I can’t believe what you’re saying
    Is that a new excuse?
    This one you ain’t abused
    I’m sorry, if you still think it’s working
    Cause I’m afraid it’s not

    Can’t stand the speech that you’re playing
    You’re only wasting time
    And I’m wasting these lines
    I’m sorry, but this time I’m not hurting
    I know you see I’m not…

    -Chorus-
    Cause she was just in the way…when you said you and me is wrong
    Maybe she was just in the way…all along
    She was just in the way and I hope she still is
    In the way of you fulfilling your dreams
    But she is, because your dream is cheating, so what can I say
    When it comes to that, there will always be a ‘she’ in the way

    -Bridge-
    I don’t mind you saying you love her
    I just hope you choke when you go trough this torture…

    -Chorus-
    Cause she was just in the way…when you said you and me is wrong
    Maybe she was just in the way…all along
    She was just in the way and I hope she still is
    In the way of you fulfilling your dreams
    But she is, because your dream is cheating, so what can I say
    When it comes to that, there will always be a ‘she’ in the way
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  2. cah said:

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    I would love to give some structural criticism, but it sounds great. I personally think it would make an amazing R&B song, or possibly a slow acoustic/piano song.
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Angel, I really do hope you realize the tremendous talent that you have for elegant expression of emotion. This is yet another amazing work. I'm not saying that just to please you, I'm saying it because it's the plain honest truth.

    Many times I imagine your lyrics as a folk song, a ballad .. not that I like ballads all that much, because I don't but just because I can't imagine that any other genre could do your lyrics justice. As cah suggested, I think this could work great with piano or acoustic guitar.
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