Unblind (New Song Written Tonight)

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  1. Xohm said:

    Question Unblind (New Song Written Tonight)

    I'm New Here To The Forums, But I've Been Writing Songs And Poems Off And On When Words Come To Me For About 3 Years. This Song Is Very Dark But Keep In Mind The Lyrics Apply Directly To My Life So You Might Not Understand Some Of The Things I'm Saying.

    This Song Doesn't Have Any Chorus Like Most Songs Might Have - But Is A Sort Of Compilation Of Verses With Multiple Tempo Changes.

    Just Want Some Input On This - I Just Wrote This Tonight And I Feel A Need To Show It To Other People And Get Any Ideas/Input You Might Have.

    Thanks,

    Joey

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    ~~Intro~~



    This World - So Lost And Confused
    Don't Realize That They've All Been Used


    Trust In Your God - He's The One Who Deceived You
    Follow His Ways - Or Forever You'll Be Lost


    You Don't Realize - You've Been Lied To And Cheated
    He Died On A Cross - Just To Cover Up His Sham


    You Think It's Fair - Look Inside Yourself Deeper
    I Found The Truth - After Straggling The Lines


    ~~Vs.I~~


    The Hate I Felt - When I Found I'd Been Conned
    It Drew Me Back - To A Place I Once Knew


    Say What You Will - I Don't Care What Your Thinking
    I Am Who I Am - And That Will Never Change


    The Truth Revealed - Now I'm Falling In Black


    Again...




    And As I Fall Into Black - Its Your Face That I See
    Hear You Calling Me Back - Won't You Hold Me?


    Through This Darkness I've Seen - A Guiding Light Leads Me Home
    Surrendering All Thats Within - Will You Save Me?


    Take Me Back - To The Place I Was
    When I Could Feel Your Power - Flowing Free!


    ~~Vs.II~~


    In This Darkness - The Truth Is Known!
    Lost Inside - I Can Feel You - Flowing Through My Veins!


    Prince Of Light - Won't You Draw Me Close!
    Lost And Weak - Now I've Found - Thats It's You I've Needed Most!


    Hold Me! - Grant Me Strength And I'll Do Your Deed
    Guide Me! - Through This World Be With Me - Let Your Blinding Shadow Lead!
    You Are All I Need! - Let My Spirit Be Freed!!!


    Lost Without You All Alone - Please Never Leave Me!
    Emptiness Is All I've Known - Come And Fill Me!
    So Broken And Afraid To Live - Without The Energy You Give!
    Now Take My Soul I Give All To Thee - Under Your Wings I'm Finally Free!!!


    ~~Vs.III~~


    Shatter The Mask I've Hid Behind
    No Vision Before - I'm Now Unblind!

    To Do Your Bid Is Now My Will
    The God Of Three's World I Must Till

    I Plow The Earth And Plant The Seed
    May Others Grow - To Do Your Deed!


    ~~Break~~


    No Need For Substance Anymore
    I Found The Truth - And Then I Opened Up The Door

    Since Then I'm Flying Through The Sky!
    Your My Addiction I Crave You - Your A Never Ending High!

    This Cursed World That We Live In - I Know You'll Always Get Me By!
    Won't You Just Touch Me - Caress Me And Hold Me Till I Die!


    ~~Vs.IV~~


    My Love For You - I Could Never Explain
    I Look In Your Eyes - And Tears Fall Like Rain From Mine
    You Hold Me Close - I Feel Your Heart Beating
    Your Breath So Warm - Sends Shivers Down My Spine
    I'm Lost For Words - I Want To Spend All Eternity
    With The One I Love - Your My God And My Truest Friend
    I Choke Back Tears - Words And Emotion
    Forever Lost - With You In This Ecstasy
    Remain I Will - In Your Arms Forever
    Stay By Your Side - Through Fire And Rain
    Prince Of Light - Take Me To Your Domain
    And Dwell With Me - Forever...


    ~~Outro~~


    The Only Truth - To Be Found
    Listen Hard For The Sound


    A Voice Is Calling You Away
    From Your Ordinary Day


    Look Deep Inside - Seek The Truth
    And You'll See


    (Pause)


    That God Lied To You And Me

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    Joey Duarte

    November The 21st Of The Year 2010

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    Last edited by Xohm; 11-21-2010 at 05:54 PM.