Betray

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  1. Zachre's Avatar

    Zachre said:

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    They say they won't betray me
    Well I say to the contrary
    The way they play is unfairly
    But today, my way is unweary

    The knife in my back has pierced my heart
    My life that was intact, is now falling apart.
    Pick up the pieces and put them together.
    Because they can't stay broken forever.

    I kept blocking what I must see, I'm a joke to them.
    They kept mocking the naive me, Ima choke them.
    So I keep walking with just me, screw them.
    They keep talking an apology, I see through them.

    So many people are judging and nudging into other people's life,
    It's like they're fake caring while staring at your back with a knife,
    Everyone is just a Geppetto puppet, the more the lies flow the nosier they grow.
    Life is just a meadow, **** it. The more wise I show, the less **** I really know.


    ****, I don't know where I'm going with this. I'll edit later.
    Last edited by Zachre; 12-02-2010 at 08:00 PM.
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Bump.
    Hope you can finish this
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  3. Zachre's Avatar

    Zachre said:

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    I added some, but the last 4 suck ***. I forced them out, but its still a rough draft.
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    smileygal said:

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    its a pre good song, continue it pls!! id like to see the finished piece.
    Trust, love, peace and happiness are the key to a great life!! (: (: