Two Faced

Hey all! It's been a little while and this is my band's newest outing. This was put together, music and all, a couple days ago. It's about a guy that's aware of a second personality within him that he's trying to get rid of. Let me know what you think and enjoy!

I’m f***ed if I do it and
I’m f***ed if I don’t.
You say that I can do it
When I tell you I won’t.
What made me think you’d go away
If I slit my wrists to end your day?
This is my nightmare,
Deathless eternal stare!

God it’s wrong, this thing that’s inside me,
Tearing at my sanity!
God, please just leave me be!

They don’t listen, tell me you’re not real,
You’re the demon that’s inside me only I can feel.
How can I make you go away?!
If I die, you die too.
It’s the only way that I’ll be rid of you.
All that’s left is suffocation!

Now that you’re gone
I see the light,
It burns right through my eyes! X2

I just realized how short this was lol For those of you that are familiar with my work, you will notice that the content and style, for the most part, is the same but the length is just..............wow

Yeah lol...it's good though

"You’re the demon that’s inside me only I can feel.
How can I make you go away?!
If I die, you die too.
It’s the only way that I’ll be rid of you."
Thats my favourite part
Bit short though haha try to write some more.. its a good song
smiley xxx

Believe me, I would love to add more in the way of what's going on in the guy's head, but with the music we already have it wouldn't work.

Hey Sewn Up, glad to see some new stuff from you.

I think this is fine, guessing the music limitations. And you know sometimes we can go a little too far, drag it out too much, right? It can also be good to leave it open-ended.

Or maybe wrap it up in another song lyric. How about that?