Two Faces

Don't leave me here!...
It's dark and I....well, I'm talking to a tear
It's all the same
I'll ask it anything, and it'll say your name
Bitter.
It's easy, it will say
It's easy, to just say
I'm broken, but not scared.
I won't give up, well....I'm still gonna dare
Sweeter!

-Chorus-
My two faces will keep me company in these empty places
There's nothing here, nothing to beg for
Nothing at all inside and stoned beauty outside
Just two faces I've seen a thousand times before
One with a broken smile, one with tears of denial

Just go away!
It's cold and you...won't warm me up anyway
It'd be the same
And wherever I looked...all I'd see is your name
Bitter.
"No, you can't", I'll read there
No, I can't, I don't care
I've spoken, and meant it.
I can't decide, well...I'm gonna have to.
Sweeter!

-Chorus-
My two faces will keep me company in these empty places
There's nothing here, nothing to beg for
Nothing at all inside and stoned beauty outside
Just two faces I've seen a thousand times before
One with a broken smile, one with tears of denial

-Bridge-
But none is me, none of those ever were
One is you and one is, oh well, her...

-Chorus-
But two faces will keep me company in these empty places
There's nothing here, not anymore
Nothing at all inside and stoned beauty outside
Just two faces I've seen a thousand times before
One with a broken smile, one with tears of denial

Usually I don't know how to review your songs because they're all so complete and fit together so well. This one is no exception. This is definitely my favourite song of yours. It just seems so honest and raw. I love it.

There you have it Angel. And I logged in from cell just to say this: I've read all the great poets. Start copyrighting your lyrics. You're that good. I mean it, I'm serious, just do it

I have not read much of your work yet, this being the first but, from what I have read you are gifted. I hope you have taken MoonRide42's advice.

This really is amazing Angel. The words and thoughts flow with an elegance that I've only read in some of the best poetry. I read it again every day.