New Rap - Moving On. Any feedback?

Ok, so this is a new rap I've made. I wrote it with a happy, kinda high energy dance type beat in my head. Verses are rapped, hook is more talked than rapped I feel, and verse three is sung at the moment but I don't think I can sing so I will be forging a rap for that part soon anyway, I'd like some feedback for this please

Moving on

(Verse 1)
Climbing over mountain top
Wonder when it will all stop
Like you just got out of school
'cos you know what you want to do
Gotta keep on moving through
Time hold from losing too
Much to stop the growing flow
'cos you know where you gotta go
Avoid all the troubled times
Destroyed all of Hitlers mines
Battles with your endless rhymes
And training with the greatest minds
Beating up the bullies mates
Sending them to hellish gates
Getting up on random spates
Of chilling out and better dates

(Hook)
Inspiration and reparation
Liberation as we're moving on
Preparation and separation
The elation as we're moving on
Take it out and let's rearrange it
You know you got to so don't go away
Get going on and make sure you do it
Take your time but have no delay

(Verse 2)
Contemplate the greatest date
Living with your bestest mate
Trying hard and working good
While living like you knew you should
Buying stuff and keeping cool
Diving in your swimming pool
Bathing in your newest suit
And wallow in your greatest fruit
Take the money, give it out
Ride a bike and have a shout
Have a laugh or have a bath
And buy the swag Armani scarf
Holiday or go to work
Abu Dhabi, maybe Perth
You know what you want to do
So move it on and see it through

(Hook)
Inspiration and reparation
Liberation as we're moving on
Preparation and separation
The elation as we're moving on
Take it out and let's rearrange it
You know you got to so don't go away
Get going on and make sure you do it
Take your time but have no delay

(Verse 3) - Sung would better but rapped at the moment

Grab a new shiny top
Grab one for you
Take me to the next stop
Take me on through
I beat the greatest foe
I'll ever know
I went to all new heights
More than was right, all for you

(Hook)
Inspiration and reparation
Liberation as we're moving on
Preparation and separation
The elation as we're moving on
Take it out and let's rearrange it
You know you got to so don't go away
Get going on and make sure you do it
Take your time but have no delay

(Outro)
Heal your hurt, and heal all your mind
Take your time and see what you find
Give it a go, and give it a show
Give it your all and see what you know
Heal your hurt, and heal all your mind
Take your time and see what you find
Give it a go, and give it a show
Give it your all and see what you know

Well I don't know about anyone else, and I'm no rap expert, but I love it. And why won't verse 3 word just as well as the others? Just a little creativity or mmph in the spoken energy and I think you got it. I really do like the way this flows.

Yeah, thanks a lot glad you like it. I am going to work on a better verse 3 which I will post on here sometime soon and I can see the obvious flaws with it. Reviews are always helpful well, any more opinions from anyone? The more the better I always say

Well, as promised I have a new verse 3 which has the same flow of the first 2 verses but with just a few shake ups for a bit of variance. Here it is again:

Moving on

(Verse 1)
Climbing over mountain top
Wonder when it will all stop
Like you just got out of school
'cos you know what you want to do
Gotta keep on moving through
Time hold from losing too
Much to stop the growing flow
'cos you know where you gotta go
Avoid all the troubled times
Destroyed all of Hitlers mines
Battles with your endless rhymes
And training with the greatest minds
Beating up the bullies mates
Sending them to hellish gates
Getting up on random spates
Of chilling out and better dates

(Hook)
Inspiration and reparation
Liberation as we're moving on
Preparation and separation
The elation as we're moving on
Take it out and let's rearrange it
You know you got to so don't go away
Get going on and make sure you do it
Take your time but have no delay

(Verse 2)
Contemplate the greatest date
Living with your bestest mate
Trying hard and working good
While living like you knew you should
Buying stuff and keeping cool
Diving in your swimming pool
Bathing in your newest suit
And wallow in your greatest fruit
Take the money, give it out
Ride a bike and have a shout
Have a laugh or have a bath
And buy the swag Armani scarf
Holiday or go to work
Abu Dhabi, maybe Perth
You know what you want to do
So move it on and see it through

(Hook)
Inspiration and reparation
Liberation as we're moving on
Preparation and separation
The elation as we're moving on
Take it out and let's rearrange it
You know you got to so don't go away
Get going on and make sure you do it
Take your time but have no delay

(Verse 3)
Drive me on to greater good
Power like I know I should
Treat you well and have a laugh
And hope to be the other half
Battles done and angels won
Better time and stories spun
Luscious clothes and snazzy gold
With precious others left untold
Wads of cash, glamour too
Lots of fun to see me through
Get me through the hardest times
With mugs of coffee, pretty rhymes
Lovers on, single off
Never ever need to stop
Traipsing through the path of life
And finding what I hoped to find

(Hook)
Inspiration and reparation
Liberation as we're moving on
Preparation and separation
The elation as we're moving on
Take it out and let's rearrange it
You know you got to so don't go away
Get going on and make sure you do it
Take your time but have no delay

(Outro)
Heal your hurt, and heal all your mind
Take your time and see what you find
Give it a go, and give it a show
Give it your all and see what you know
Heal your hurt, and heal all your mind
Take your time and see what you find
Give it a go, and give it a show
Give it your all and see what you know

Well, let me know what you all think of it now. The more reviews the better

Well, anyone else have any views to share on this?