Hikari no Yuki

Waki ni yuri se zu, shinkeishou ga yuukan na
Shinpi teki na mirai ni mae, boku ha nani kao yosoku deki masen
let ha to kugi dake boku no mubou na pasu o hour

I brave the neurosis without swaying aside
To the mysterious future ahead, I cannot predict anything
Only let tooth and nail carve my reckless path

Byouga mitsu aka de mottomo amai kaori
Boku ha, saigo no warutsu de onajimi no kage no naka no heya no yousui
Kono kanashimi ga watashi no shoukan ni nari masu

The nectar drawn red with a fragrance most sweet
Pumping the chambers inside me, the last waltz with the familiar shadows
This grief will be my redemption

Boku no kokoro o kousa shi, fuyou na shudan otsuujite no namida
Dakara moshi boku ha furikaeru desu ka? Subete no mae ni mi te kit a
Boku no namida, kuchibue no kaze to samu sa de nagai shishou kansou ga ari masen

Cross my heart and tear through the gratuitous means
So what if I look back? I've seen it all before
My tears have dried in the whistling wind, and the cold no longer stings

Saichou no dansu o shuuryou suru ni ichi tsu no saishuu doraggu
Boku ha riyuu ni koru bakku ha tsuki ni shiroi hada o burendo shi masu
Shikashi, boku no mae ni mouichido, ki ga kurut ta you ni resu o suru ni ha, boku no kokoro no genin

One last drag before we end the longest dance
My pale skin blends into the moon, calling me back to reason
But your before me again, causing my heart to race madly

Muimi na bara ibara nashi toshite
Anata no ha no fukai boku nise no risou to tomoni shizumu
Hi ga hoboru mae ni boku o shukketsu shi masu
Umarekawaru kaiketsu ni chokumen shi tai no desu ga

Pointless as roses without thorns
Sink your teeth in deep along with my false ideals
Bleed me before the sun rises
I want to face it with reborn resolve

Anata no atataka sa dake ga nokotte I masu
Monosugoku suki dare
Kinou ni kisu o fuku
Ashita, yakusoku o kaishishi masu
Boku ha yakusoku o rikoushi masu

Only your warmth is left
The one whom I love so much
I blow a kiss to yesterday
Tomorrow begins the promise
I will fulfill my promise to you

Wonderful.
I don't want to say too much and risk breaking the spell.

lol! It is perfectly alright. I would like to know what you think. If silence is better, let it stand then.

Well, I love it from start to finish! My impression is that there is bitter-sweet elegance in the way your lyrics blend yesterday's pains (neurosis) and treasures (the one whom I love so much) with a blind-daring run for the future:

Only let tooth and nail carve my reckless path

And the finishing touch:

I blow a kiss to yesterday
Tomorrow begins the promise

But I think every line is a perfect part of the whole, and there is not a single word that could be changed to make it better. Again I think this is just wonderful.