Up to Here

Ha, kind of a quick, fun song that I just put together in a matter of minutes.

(Verse 1)
A step for you is a thousand miles for me.
You do what you want,
and I do what you plea.
Wasting nights that could be better together.
You're at it once again,
and I'm left all alone.

(Chorus)
I've had it up to here with,
these things that you call fun.
I'm almost sick to death,
because you don't care what you've done.
So hopefully someone will seem to care,
because right now you're not being very fair.
I've had it up to here.

(Verse 2)
Beauty is great, but it comes up too short.
You think that it's fine,
but you don't even know.
Laughing off all of my deepest thoughts.
You think that it's cute,
but I think that you're a *****.

(Chorus)
I've had it up to here with,
these things that you call fun.
I'm almost sick to death,
because you don't care what you've done.
So hopefully someone will seem to care,
because right now you're not being very fair.
I've had it up to here.

(...?)
So I'll try to put you behind.
I've grown up on my own terms.

I've given it all up again,
but this time I'm on my own turf.

(More "...?")
So I'll try to put you behind,
because I'm not blind,
and don't need,
you're fat, caked lies.
I've given it all up,
and I'm on my turf.
I think I've grown up,
on my own terms, without you.

(Chorus)
I've had it up to here with,
these things that you call fun.
I'm almost sick to death,
because you don't care what you've done.
So hopefully someone will seem to care,
because right now you're not being very fair.
But I'm just wasting time...

Dang ... believe it or not, I've just been spending the past few hours wishing I could write something like this. And your opening line really sets it up.
Anyway, maybe if you polish it up some I bet it could be really good. I'm just saying I can see you wrote it quick, coz I've read some of the other great stuff you've written, but this is how greatness starts sometimes, right? Take it to the top.

Originally Posted by MoonRide42

Dang ... believe it or not, I've just been spending the past few hours wishing I could write something like this. And your opening line really sets it up.
Anyway, maybe if you polish it up some I bet it could be really good. I'm just saying I can see you wrote it quick, coz I've read some of the other great stuff you've written, but this is how greatness starts sometimes, right? Take it to the top.

Yeah, I wrote it realllyyy fast.. and I have been polishing it up, and yes, most of my songs start out like crap and take lots of TLC. Thanks for the comment!

De nada, always my pleasure