No(W) More Hate

Hi there! Want you to check my lyrics for any mistakes. I do not know English quite well so I think that any of your advices will be very useful for me

So, here's the lyrics:


I Forgive you all
Will you forgive me
For all the things I have done
To enable your anger

Will you demand for contribution?
Or let me live
My past life of wrath and distrust?

I have no will to change me
Though, I’ve no will to change you

I give it up
No more ‘messiah’ **** for me

I won’t tell you what you should do
If you want it, you’ll get it yourself
I will not walk around you
For the sake of my profit
I realized that I have failed
All attempts of getting out of my grave
I’ve lost my rage but still
I won’t claim that I have no more hate

Invidious face of life
Rubs on my leg
Like a shadow of black cat

Deflections of my mind
Raise a new god from the ashes
Of hatred and depravity

I have no will to cure me
Though, I see no way of doing it

I clear my minds from the
Rust of compassion
But still I don’t care about you

I won’t tell you what you should do
If you want it, you’ll get it yourself
I will not walk around you
For the sake of my profit
I realized that I have failed
All attempts of getting out of my grave
I’ve lost my rage but still
I won’t claim that I have no more hate


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Sick Passion

You smell incredible
Your skin is totally white
I’m happy to lay with you

We’ve met at the party
I still don’t know how I got there
You were standing alone
So lost and helpless

You make me shiver
Oh, I’m so excited
Excuse me, can I take you away?

My curse, my bless
My sick passion

Your eyes are blue like the sky
Your hair is soft like silk
I ****ing admire you

I took you to my house
Your strong body makes me sweat
The beauty that no woman can have
Oh, you’re the sexiest guy I’ve ever met

Then I took my scarf
Wrapped it around your neck
Your eyes roll back
Life slowly flows out of your body

For five days you laid under the floor
Then I took you out – I was alone
Scenes of normal life with a corpse

I’ve made some funny pictures of us
Then we took a bath – need to be clean
We had sex so much I’ve lost some weight
It’s pity that you rot

My curse, my bless
My sick passion
I love you all
Though, it’s never enough

I want some more of dead men’s flesh
Again and again
Again