Progress poem

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  1. shadowtouch said:

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    Destroy the foundation with what we assume
    Rock the house with this aggressive tune
    So when they say, Gray, what have you bin drinking?
    I just say that I've bin thinking
    These kids here be doped out on wot we gave out
    Rhythm and rhyme, and a message wot we be all about
    Better than state education, but less important than tha United Nation
    Just remember, this be your creation, as the ship tht sinks which we call civilization
    A bloodstained society, as the kids whine ther's not enough musical variety

    Guess a number, just guess
    Just like me, let me be, or else I'll give ya no rest
    I'll be a pest till ya run to Budapest
    But even that place I'll infest
    I'm walking on, new heights
    Can see Christmas lights
    Tourist in me own city, seeing the sights...

    Just something I came up with on the spot. It's more like a rap really, but poems come in various shapes and sizes. I'd like feedback plz.
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    I liked it lots haha
    keep it up, mate.
    ^^
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