Aint **** high enough to stop me in my tracks
Lets keep it moving we have to run what we sat
We need to pick it up and decides its out fate
Let it stay up late decide how much love and hate
It can possess what it wants and we can't stop it
We don't have any power do this **** we have to drop out
I don't know what your problem is but I think your bleeding
We need to call an amberlamps start to scream and show
I cant slow the bleeding or your needing for my seedling
you are a freak and a creep **** I don't need
You are a power hungry ****er **** that I feed
You eat my soul and love slowly day by day
I can't help to let you do it though because I want to stay
Your feelings for me are over-ridden but mine have just begun
Hopefully I can win your love sometime and declare this battle won
You have to write something in under thirty seconds, you can think if you want, but it takes up time. No thinking before hand. go go go!
Dont gimme them lines that u know I can't take
I'll tie up your dreams and throw em in a lake
Keep feedin me lies and look me strait in the eyes
I'll lash back with word-knives while my bleeding heart dies
Gettin back my peace so I'll let go of that leash
That you think I've got on you but I never wanted to
Set myself up to crash and burn shxt when will I learn
Not to fall so damn bad for a girl that's so rad
That she don't know herself much less how to help me
Crawl outa this hole that has blackened my soul
Just gimme back my mind, stop throwin the dime
That makes it seem like you lost all your dreams
I know you ain't shipwrecked just re-get your self-respect
Yeah you kicked me in the ballz but you had your cause
And it's all from the fall now just move on down the hall
Take life for the long haul and don't maul tomorrow with the past.
Well ok I guess it took me 3 minutes to type alla that and I fell apart on the last line. And I ain't no rapper. But can I at least get an E for Effort?
edit: Btw I probably exhausted myself for today with that little bit, and maybe for-freakin-ever so maybe you shouldn't expect anymore from me in this topic ;-)
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well, lemme have a go don't blame me if it's disastrous cos i'm freestyling and i ain't done very much of it cos i'm from a place and people where rapping ain't too popular. btw, this'll take more than 30 seconds cos i'm typing so i'll see what i do it in
Ain't gonna pxss on me in words out from these lyrics
you ain't got the game, no cause and none of spirit
i'll knock out of daylight and knock it out your face
or rhyme you out cos i ain't hard but word you into place
i aint awesome but just lemme say it now
but skills i learned myself and try em out on you right now
and somewhere i know you'll be shxtting yourself
cos da new kids in town to hit your wealth with stealthy
vocab and rhymes to unwind your structure, english unbind
and if i find the time to do the crime, yeah, that's a bad fart line
but still, the point stands:
i am the man and you're the child
fresh off the bat but my lyrics are wild
well, at least good as i make them
i go as far as i take them,
and so i'll leave you with this then.
There we are, took me about 3-4 mins as well. I'm quite sure that someone will be able to rip this apart, or at least reply with a rhyme that out does this by miles. Maybe i should practise more...
Last edited by Jfam; 01-12-2011 at 11:57 AM.
Reason: spelling mistakes
Why are you guys trying to rap in like 3 or 4 minutes ? I like to take my time when I write, I like my 15 to 30 minutes.
You guys planning on freestyling or something ?
It is basically the online chat version of freestyling I plan to get better anyway. If you ever make it big or hang around with others who rap you always get asked to spit something. But to answer the question I'm planning to be able to freestyle, not sure about the others? Anyway, it's defo a challenge to type and think 16 bars in 3-4 mins, and I like a bit of a challenge
I have never put anymore time into a rap than five minutes on a rap on here Haha. But here we go for another 30 second one.
c4 on my chest running gonna explode in this *****
kill everyone in the building I aint ready for dis ****
Im killin innocent people as I walk on the road of death
Take out my pistol put my ammo and load whats left
Put to some heads pull the trigger for a kill
Like an eagle I sprout my wings and just soar for the thrill
Rabid dog ready to eat anything like im ****ing ferocious
Beat so smooth but yet my flow is stuck on atrocious.
Alright, I guess I'll give it a shot hahaa. I definitely need some rapid dome work.
This is my freestyle, so listen to my rhyme
Listen while I do this, I won't waste your time
Everyone in this rapping game gets faker daily
Where's the ones who're tapping fame but stay real to who they be
I want a message to be sent, not a beat to be dropped
Tell me what you represent, not how you hipped and you hopped.
I will never sell out my content for what my so called fans want
I will always tell what I meant, I don't need to be buried in their ****.
You want me to please you? Ease you of your pains?
I don't mean to tease you, but I'm not in this for your gains
So I'll do me and you do you, if you like what you see then come on through
I don't need your respect, your money or your support.
If you **** with me, I'll time travel and make your mom abort
Nah, **** that it'd be a waste of my time, I'll just laugh and stay sublime.
Or subliminally make you realize the demise of the society due to its lies.
The world is crashing, but the lives of others are not mine to fix.
I'm just living mine, and sharing a few tricks.
That took me about 3-4 minutes. Way to long hahaha
I have my charisma at the level of max
Swagga on high with my beast mode turned on
Grab my game and put it on glue it on my straps
Your game aint nothing but a rip, just a kiddy con
I lost my mind it's somewhere up in the sky
I hope you can help me find it I think I got too high
I am my own king and I own my palace while your my peon
You cant keep up with for I am ahead of you by an eon
But here we go while im sitting in gold with my riches
Your chillin in a trashcan because your growin up in poverty clothes made of stitches
Im borderline crazy, while your rap lacks heart its way too lazy
I cant keep you off me your all over my **** step back all you and your *****es
Lack a good game but you slack for the fame pack and run away from your hidden shame
Walk down that path somberly as I stand at the top with my laugh nuclear
Tail between your legs you retreat back because your spit is lame, but here we go the show is over your already done neutered.
If you can't face the truth then you're living in a lie,
Don't fake that you got it cos we meet eye to eye
And if you all think, that you got what it takes,
Take one more look cos I just raised the stakes
That's all I could type in 30 seconds XD
Random spontaneity:
The timer's counting down, tick tick, on the watch,
While you're Daddy's waiting at home, all alone, drinking scotch
If you give a man a fish, then he'll live for a day,
But if you give a man his soul, then he'll show you the way
You can't take it back once you know the truth,
It's like a spider, hypnotiser, makes a fool out of you
You could turn back, but that's all you'll know
And by the end of the day, you can die alone