Lmao try this

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  1. Tyler6270 said:

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    Aint **** high enough to stop me in my tracks
    Lets keep it moving we have to run what we sat
    We need to pick it up and decides its out fate
    Let it stay up late decide how much love and hate
    It can possess what it wants and we can't stop it
    We don't have any power do this **** we have to drop out
    I don't know what your problem is but I think your bleeding
    We need to call an amberlamps start to scream and show
    I cant slow the bleeding or your needing for my seedling
    you are a freak and a creep **** I don't need
    You are a power hungry ****er **** that I feed
    You eat my soul and love slowly day by day
    I can't help to let you do it though because I want to stay
    Your feelings for me are over-ridden but mine have just begun
    Hopefully I can win your love sometime and declare this battle won

    You have to write something in under thirty seconds, you can think if you want, but it takes up time. No thinking before hand. go go go!
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Dont gimme them lines that u know I can't take
    I'll tie up your dreams and throw em in a lake
    Keep feedin me lies and look me strait in the eyes
    I'll lash back with word-knives while my bleeding heart dies
    Gettin back my peace so I'll let go of that leash
    That you think I've got on you but I never wanted to
    Set myself up to crash and burn shxt when will I learn
    Not to fall so damn bad for a girl that's so rad
    That she don't know herself much less how to help me
    Crawl outa this hole that has blackened my soul
    Just gimme back my mind, stop throwin the dime
    That makes it seem like you lost all your dreams
    I know you ain't shipwrecked just re-get your self-respect
    Yeah you kicked me in the ballz but you had your cause
    And it's all from the fall now just move on down the hall
    Take life for the long haul and don't maul tomorrow with the past.

    Well ok I guess it took me 3 minutes to type alla that and I fell apart on the last line. And I ain't no rapper. But can I at least get an E for Effort?

    edit: Btw I probably exhausted myself for today with that little bit, and maybe for-freakin-ever so maybe you shouldn't expect anymore from me in this topic ;-)
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  3. Jfam said:

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    well, lemme have a go don't blame me if it's disastrous cos i'm freestyling and i ain't done very much of it cos i'm from a place and people where rapping ain't too popular. btw, this'll take more than 30 seconds cos i'm typing so i'll see what i do it in

    Ain't gonna pxss on me in words out from these lyrics
    you ain't got the game, no cause and none of spirit
    i'll knock out of daylight and knock it out your face
    or rhyme you out cos i ain't hard but word you into place
    i aint awesome but just lemme say it now
    but skills i learned myself and try em out on you right now
    and somewhere i know you'll be shxtting yourself
    cos da new kids in town to hit your wealth with stealthy
    vocab and rhymes to unwind your structure, english unbind
    and if i find the time to do the crime, yeah, that's a bad fart line
    but still, the point stands:
    i am the man and you're the child
    fresh off the bat but my lyrics are wild
    well, at least good as i make them
    i go as far as i take them,
    and so i'll leave you with this then.

    There we are, took me about 3-4 mins as well. I'm quite sure that someone will be able to rip this apart, or at least reply with a rhyme that out does this by miles. Maybe i should practise more...
    Last edited by Jfam; 01-12-2011 at 11:57 AM. Reason: spelling mistakes
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    Molotova said:

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    Why are you guys trying to rap in like 3 or 4 minutes ? I like to take my time when I write, I like my 15 to 30 minutes.
    You guys planning on freestyling or something ?
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  5. Jfam said:

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    It is basically the online chat version of freestyling I plan to get better anyway. If you ever make it big or hang around with others who rap you always get asked to spit something. But to answer the question I'm planning to be able to freestyle, not sure about the others? Anyway, it's defo a challenge to type and think 16 bars in 3-4 mins, and I like a bit of a challenge
  6. Tyler6270 said:

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    I have never put anymore time into a rap than five minutes on a rap on here Haha. But here we go for another 30 second one.

    c4 on my chest running gonna explode in this *****
    kill everyone in the building I aint ready for dis ****
    Im killin innocent people as I walk on the road of death
    Take out my pistol put my ammo and load whats left

    Put to some heads pull the trigger for a kill
    Like an eagle I sprout my wings and just soar for the thrill
    Rabid dog ready to eat anything like im ****ing ferocious
    Beat so smooth but yet my flow is stuck on atrocious.
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    Zachre said:

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    Alright, I guess I'll give it a shot hahaa. I definitely need some rapid dome work.

    This is my freestyle, so listen to my rhyme
    Listen while I do this, I won't waste your time
    Everyone in this rapping game gets faker daily
    Where's the ones who're tapping fame but stay real to who they be

    I want a message to be sent, not a beat to be dropped
    Tell me what you represent, not how you hipped and you hopped.
    I will never sell out my content for what my so called fans want
    I will always tell what I meant, I don't need to be buried in their ****.

    You want me to please you? Ease you of your pains?
    I don't mean to tease you, but I'm not in this for your gains
    So I'll do me and you do you, if you like what you see then come on through
    I don't need your respect, your money or your support.

    If you **** with me, I'll time travel and make your mom abort
    Nah, **** that it'd be a waste of my time, I'll just laugh and stay sublime.
    Or subliminally make you realize the demise of the society due to its lies.
    The world is crashing, but the lives of others are not mine to fix.

    I'm just living mine, and sharing a few tricks.

    That took me about 3-4 minutes. Way to long hahaha
    Last edited by Zachre; 01-16-2011 at 09:20 PM.
  8. Tyler6270 said:

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    It's cool = )

    I have my charisma at the level of max
    Swagga on high with my beast mode turned on
    Grab my game and put it on glue it on my straps
    Your game aint nothing but a rip, just a kiddy con
    I lost my mind it's somewhere up in the sky
    I hope you can help me find it I think I got too high
    I am my own king and I own my palace while your my peon
    You cant keep up with for I am ahead of you by an eon
    But here we go while im sitting in gold with my riches
    Your chillin in a trashcan because your growin up in poverty clothes made of stitches
    Im borderline crazy, while your rap lacks heart its way too lazy
    I cant keep you off me your all over my **** step back all you and your *****es
    Lack a good game but you slack for the fame pack and run away from your hidden shame
    Walk down that path somberly as I stand at the top with my laugh nuclear
    Tail between your legs you retreat back because your spit is lame, but here we go the show is over your already done neutered.

    This is so ****ing hard.
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    Zachre said:

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    Bump :P
  10. RobberBaron said:

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    If you can't face the truth then you're living in a lie,
    Don't fake that you got it cos we meet eye to eye
    And if you all think, that you got what it takes,
    Take one more look cos I just raised the stakes

    That's all I could type in 30 seconds XD

    Random spontaneity:

    The timer's counting down, tick tick, on the watch,
    While you're Daddy's waiting at home, all alone, drinking scotch
    If you give a man a fish, then he'll live for a day,
    But if you give a man his soul, then he'll show you the way

    You can't take it back once you know the truth,
    It's like a spider, hypnotiser, makes a fool out of you
    You could turn back, but that's all you'll know
    And by the end of the day, you can die alone

    Yeah, um, rapping's not for me XD