Turned Down Heaven

Song I wrote today. It's really meaningful to me. My girlfriend just left me. We were in a long distance relationship until I get back home in June, but she couldn't take the distance.

Verse 1
Betrayal of trust
I feel that I must
Let you know
It goes to show
This is how much
I care about you
I will never let you go
When you’re in my embrace

Chorus
And I turned down Heaven
I turned down Heaven
Just to be with you
And I turned down Heaven,
Yeah, I turned down Heaven
Nothing more I can do
So if you still don’t love me
Let me know
But I really fail to see
How you can let me go




Verse 2
Last night my heart failed
Last night my soul flailed
With the pain of all of this
And if I could kiss
All your pain away
I would do that
On any day
I will never let you go

Verse 3
And if I just faded away
If all this ended today
Then would you be okay
What if it all came crashing down
What if I never make it back to town
I want nothing more than to be together
Be together forever
I will never let you go

Its good but verse 3 shouldnt be any longer than the other 2 verses..
just opinion