Different sort of lyrics post! Post em here! READ description it's IMPORTANT

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  1. Squishums said:

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    Alright, this post is for you! The collective body of this website! To put your lyrics and songs that are NOT about love or boys or girls! No love songs. This is for songs and lyrics that in my opinion have a deeper meaning guys! Get creative and remember no love songs!
    -kthxbai
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  2. girl with one eye. said:

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    I've been struggling with an eating disorder for almost a year now, so thats what made me start write this song.. it's still not done yet, and I can't think of anything for a good chorus. :P
    It's called 'Perfection'.

    I've been told
    And I've learned it too be true
    that the only way to happiness
    is to be good enough for you

    And I have a perfect secret
    I've been keeping for a while
    I hide my flaws and imperfections
    underneath a perfect smile

    In perfect slumbers, perfect sleep,
    those imperfections slowly creep
    through my body, thick as mud
    and soon they're swirling in my blood

    It's that shear perfection I've longed to taste
    perfect frills and perfect lace
    So I plaster on my perfect smile
    though I'm close to breaking, all the while.

    In every form that you can measure
    I need to be the best
    Smart, funny, lovely, kind,
    my hips, my waist, my chest.

    So I'll smile my perfect smile
    perfect lips and perfect teeth
    though I'm empty, cold and breakable,
    I'll keep it hidden underneath

    A lovely girl
    A pretty girl
    that's what I want to be
    But truth be told, the biggest flaw
    I've ever seen is me.
     
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    Does anybody know where we're going to?
    Or am I just stepping on the cracks?

    Like a butterfly at the end of July,
    my time will come and I'll turn to dust.

    I locked myself inside a web,
    and it didn't seem so bad.

    It's what they say on the outside,
    that makes my heart want to die.

    The end is near and I know it's true,
    and baby I don't wanna be near you.

    Staying out of hell as long as I can,
    I don't care what happens in the ruins.

    So I wanna be rearranged to a brighter side,
    where maybe I can lose my fright.
    That's what I want to happen Planet Earth...

    Prices only come up for certain fairs,
    but this one's gonna cost your life.

    A warehouse of great nightmares,
    and we call ourselves the masters of being "nice and fair."

    If you're still listening,
    you've come in time.
    It's only the end,
    of a bitter crime.

    If you're still listening,
    you've come in time.
    It's only the end,
    of a bitter crime.

    Those dirty looks couldn't stop a train,
    even though I couldn't find my feet.

    Perfection what it claims,
    just a pretty version of someone insane.

    That's why I want a Plan B baby.
    That's what I want to happen Planet Earth...

    *Typed in less than 5 minutes on here.*
    Last edited by PointZero; 01-27-2011 at 10:08 PM.
     
  4. Squishums said:

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    I like yours girl with one eye! Very good and I'm working on a chourus for you as I type this haha
    -kthxbai
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    Experimentalist said:

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    Have a guess what this one is about!!

    My Town



    (Verse)

    Smokey skyline
    19th century design
    and a row of terraced houses sitting in decline

    (Bridge)
    Thats what makes it so beautiful
    Thats what makes it so real
    And why his place will always mean so much to me

    (Verse)
    Same old places
    Familiar, worn out faces
    And a feel of a town falling from grace

    (Bridge)
    Thats what makes it so beautiful
    Thats what makes it so real
    And why this place will always mean so much to me

    (Chorus)
    It's where I grew up
    It's where I cut my teeth
    And every corner of this town
    Theres a piece of you and a piece of me
    Don't let me leave it behind
    I wanna stay one more day
    Don't let me leave for a second time
    Cus this is my town, this is my town
    This is my town
     
  6. Squishums said:

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    Haha. I have a guess ya I like it but try to put it in verse chorus verse bridge chorus?
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    Experimentalist said:

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    Squishums I will put it in the order I wrote it. Also, why would you have a chorus in a song before a bridge? Surely the whole point of a bridge is to bridge the verse to the chorus.

    I will always take advice happily but I've come onto this site to give advice. Look on my profile and look at what I actually do for a living.
     
  8. Squishums said:

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    Sowwy *stares at floor*
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Hehe squishie smile silly xP
    *Smilez @ u*
    <3
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  10. Squishums said:

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    *smiles back* I just did u silly c:
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Lol yay *kiss yor cheek n hug u tight* he smiled at meeeeee...
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-