Chorus for song I'm working on

Thread: Chorus for song I'm working on

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  1. RevolvingElk said: 01-28-2011 10:59 PM

    Question Chorus for song I'm working on

    delet this
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  2. RevolvingElk said: 01-29-2011 12:00 AM

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    Comment for comment guys?
     

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    LyricsAngel said: 01-29-2011 12:04 AM

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    I think you should finish it "The pain that I feel / Please tell me it's not real"..Yeah, I get where you're coming from. Is it based on your experiences?
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.
     

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    OneSongWayne said: 01-29-2011 12:25 AM

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    I agree you should finish it. These lyrics are very good. I can hardly wait to see where you go with it.

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  5. ABigDeal said: 01-29-2011 01:47 AM

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    i dont get a central idea from this...can we get a song concept? context perhaps to make sense of this
    What Your Life Has Been Missing
     

  6. RevolvingElk said: 01-29-2011 02:45 AM

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    delet this
    Last edited by RevolvingElk; 01-18-2018 at 07:03 PM.