Just A Puppet On A Lonely String x|

Just a puppet on a lonely string..
Just a puppet on a lonely string..
Sewn on smile, button eyes..
Patching through, his heart resized..

Though every bit of love inside,
Is crying..

[chorus]
Let me be!
Quit controlling what I used to see!
My life is gone for eternity!
If you can't go on then come with me!
The Puppet on the lonely string,
Is waiting!

[verse]
close your eyes!
Forget all the things you used to despise,
It's not worth to then realize,
remembering,
The times we'll soon forget.!

You'll soon Regret...


You wont be ashamed,
of all the love you can't contain.

Don't complain, even though your love is an empty lot,
I'm sure your heart is red blood shot.
Pulsing plush cotton at your candle shop.

But I, believe..
That your more than a puppet..
More than puppet on a lonely string..
The puppet on a lonely string..
Sewn on smile, button eyes..
Patching through, his heart resized..

Though every bit of love inside,
Is crying..

[chorus]
Let me be!
Quit controlling what I used to see!
My life is gone for eternity!
If you can't go on then come with me!
The Puppet on the lonely string,
Is waiting!

[verse]
close your eyes!
Forget all the things you used to despise,
It's not worth to then realize,
remembering,
The times we'll soon forget.!

You'll soon Regret...

[bridge]
if you control me,
Soon I will control you too.
When you sew me,
I DON'T feel right, and much less new.
Why don't you let me.. Be who I am, and be who I want to be?

With
Sewn on smile, button eyes..
Patching through, my heart resized..

Though every bit of love inside,
Is crying..

[chorus]
Let me be!
Quit controlling what I used to see!
My life is gone for eternity!
If you can't go on then come with me!
The Puppet on the lonely string,
Is waiting!

[verse]
close your eyes!
Forget all the things you used to despise,
It's not worth to then realize,
remembering,
The times we'll soon forget.!

You'll soon Regret...

I love this song XD YAAY

I..I like it shadow haha. Keep up your good work or I'll take the cheesecake away

?? Whuts with the " I..I " squishie? Lmfao!
Thaaaaaaanks,, but NUUU it's myne *eats cheesecake*
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Fixed it

Shadow, please try and write original stuff, just a puppet on a lonely string are Chris Martins words. I am not going to be liked on this forum but what I have seen so far is shockingly bad. Help me out here, what sort of music is this to? I'm trying to find something good in there but I am struggling. Grammatically it is poor, I don't know whether you are talking in the past, present, future, whether you talk about you or someone else

let me be in one bit then close your eyes in another

How old are you? I hope you are young and have time to mature your writing. Reminds me of stuff I wrote when I first started out 15 years ago

13 ">> yeh I'm pretty young
N I write my song's lyrics for "fun"
I have no intentions to Sing this song ever to anybody,
Much less get famous and even show these lyrics to anybody..

N the melody n lyrics have nothing to do with Chris Martin
It came off the top of my head so sorry.
Just something that I got inspired by, by a puppet I bought then compared it to myself..

But sorry..


But thanks for referring me as Shadow.. Heh heh?..

Originally Posted by ShadowLeeSharp

13 ">> yeh I'm pretty young
N I write my song's lyrics for "fun"
I have no intentions to Sing this song ever to anybody,
Much less get famous and even show these lyrics to anybody..

N the melody n lyrics have nothing to do with Chris Martin
It came off the top of my head so sorry.
Just something that I got inspired by, by a puppet I bought then compared it to myself..

But sorry..


But thanks for referring me as Shadow.. Heh heh?..

I thought you might be a bit older, you know Lee Sharpe used to be a mega footballer for Man Utd about 15 years ago. Brilliant player. obviously not named after him then!

Just keep writing, I might keep my thoughts to myself from now on, seem to be upsetting everyone!!

Eh? oh no that's okay it's fine it's fine^^

And yeah I named myself just cause of imagination that's all.

But yeah, it was just the first meeting yah just caught me off guard that's all^^
I'm just so glad you got me on a happy day,

but I really liked those lyrics you wrote a while ago heh heh x)

See shadow, this would be exactly what I was talking about. I'm gonna write music for this ^^ I'll send it to you when I'm done.

-kthxbai

*blushes*
o-ok^^

-happyface-

, x) thanks squishie
You made me smile on a sad day,,

Sad day D: why?! Awe noo *hugz yew*

:/

Cuz,,, *hugz* just past that's all^^
<3

I sowwy

Yupp.. People seem to forget me, I'm just the little shadow that eats all the cake n hides in her room >.<..

I know exactly how you feel shadow your not alone *hugz yew*

Awh.. Yay <3 *hugs bk* I has a buddie <333 !!

I enjoy being your biddie