A little dark poem

The blood lies in a puddle of despair,
Swirl it up and see your real nightmare.

I'll sharpen my knifes, for safe keeps
I'll watch the blades sway as they reap.
Your delicate skin, into your black veins,
Every body cut, every year gained.

Wheres the love? Where's the sympathy?
There is none, just the symphony,
Of screaming, crying, despair, and breathing,
Don't think to face me, no fears of scheming?


My knife, your life.
My smile is insane,
But you would say something, you can't complain
I'll reap your torso I'll hang you high, I'll make you laugh, I'll make you cry!
I'll make you mournful with some sighs.

I'll cut your limbs, do you want to see?
Do you want to see what you can do with me?
The rain falls down, on that lifeless body
What can I say?
I'm addicted.
I'm okay.

Though you are not,
The struggle you made gave me a lot,
I could of done more,
But you see....

I still have a heart,
Yours is in me, delightful roses
But your heart isn't enough
It won't make me stop what I've done.

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Came off the top of my head, hope you liked.. Or not... Doesnt really matter lol x)
-RaZor

You rated your own thread 5 star, how modest. Seeing as you couldnt be bothered to leave a response to mine which is below I'm not gonna bother either

Hope you know that was muah, expii ^^

Muah muah, yeah I was bored so I made a dark poem then rated it cause (I wanted to).

Just some ideas were written down, then a picture to inspire me.
Then the outcome was this poem... Sorry.. Back to.. LeeSharp

oh srry shadow, guess you already commented then in a different name lol, in that case......

this is very dark! jesus nearly as dark as mine haha. Is this just a poem or a song as well?

Hmm..
For right now its just a poem, since I wrote it ive been trying to find a nice melody for it but- nothings coming to me at all >.<"
lol yes, this account (Razor) is made especially for dark poems and songs lol


Indeed it is very dark, and your poem as well.
But we all know yours is better lol, plus I KNOW you took your time on your poem.
Mine was nearly an idea to keep x)

haha thanks shadow but there's not much difference imo. If I'm honest mine only took about half hour, but I was in full creative flow. I've sent shadow a PM

Huh? Oh Shadow Mmkay let me sign out.. Plus I just found a pic that inspired me again, needa get writing lol xD