The Pain Takes Over

I can't take it anymore,
This feeling held inside,
I'm feeling so cold,
Every time I close my eyes,
It's like the life is being sucked right out of me,
I'm losing all control,
It's getting the best of me,
I just need to make the thoughts of you go away,
And if I had to describe the feeling I'd say,

It feels like my heart is being crushed,
It feels so tight,
Its getting hard to breathe,
And it's getting hard to fight,
This feeling in my chest,
I just want to let go,
Because every time I'm alone the pain takes over,
The pain takes over,
The pain takes over,

What was once so perfect,
Is now in disarray,
How can one girl do this,
Turn my world to such gray,
The thought of you with another,
Haunts me every day,
Someones got my baby,
And they better treat you right,
Because what they've got is an angel,
And I'm her long lost knight,

It feels like my heart is being crushed,
It feels so tight,
Its getting hard to breathe,
And it's getting hard to fight,
This feeling in my chest,
I just want to let go,
Because every time I'm alone the pain takes over,
The pain takes over,
The pain takes over,

First my heart speeds up,
Beats like it's in a race,
Then my mind spins,
Lost like it's in a maze,
Followed by memories,
The past I can't forget,
Finally the pain,
And wishing I was dead,

It feels like my heart is being crushed,
It feels so tight,
Its getting hard to breathe,
And it's getting hard to fight,
This feeling in my chest,
I just want to let go,
Because every time I'm alone the pain takes over,
The pain takes over,
The pain takes over.

This is good, it describes the story well keep it up.

Thanks. Appreciate it.

I can really relate to this coz it's written so well. It's risky to seem repetitive but what you wrote about is like that, so I think you pulled it off nicely. Good stuff!

Thank you so much.

you've an average 9 lines per verse (all verses have 9 lines really, except two, which have 10 and 8 - which also averages to 9), try to change that a bit, it'd look better and I'm sure it'd sound better too, as it'd not be as boring ... not saying your lyrics are boring, but always singing with the same frame could get tedious


keep it up

Thanks for the advice. Appreciate it.