Title: Forgotten nobody

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  1. MR.Alexander said:

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    do you see me standing next to you
    no you don't nobody ever does
    do you even know i exist
    why would anyone know
    no one ever cares for anyone like me

    (chorus)
    I am a forgotton nobody
    im not popular,im not cool, im a nobody
    i stand by you everyday you never notice
    when im gone no one will know my name
    because im a forgotton nobody
    who would see me
    there's nothing to see
    i'm a ghost among the living
    no one ever notices
    a forgotton nobody
    (chorus end)

    all i want is someone to care for me
    someone to know me
    to know i even exist
    someone to love me
    wipe my tears when i cry
    chase my darkness away
    but who will see me

    (chorusx2)

    walking thought he halls
    no one sees my bloody arms
    maybe if i die someone will notice me
    i'm tired of livinga life
    where no one even know im here
    i can't stand this nightmare no more
    im dying but no one sees me

    (chorusx3)
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Ditto..... I like this song Alex x')
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  3. MR.Alexander said:

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    may ia sk what u like about it so much
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    "do you see me standing next to you
    no you don't nobody ever does
    do you even know i exist
    why would anyone know
    no one ever cares for anyone like me"

    ~That reminded me of someone really special.~

    But I like it a lot.. All of your lyrics are awesome Alex
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Guilha said:

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    I like the song and its concept but you should work on your grammar and also on the flow .. For example, it'd flow nicely if you just said "no, nobody ever does" instead of "no you don't nobody ever does" (2nd line) ..

    but it's good, keep it up