"I'll be There for You.."

"I'll be There for You"

Look at me
With big brown eyes.
Express what you see,
Now tell no lies.

I endured the pain,sting and rain.
That which he brings to you.

I Know how it feels
to be left heartaching, waiting.

Come to me right now,
You won't be judged upon.
Sit, as you wonder how,
You had this pain thrust on.

He lied, decieved,
for a while you cried,
He isn't what you first percieved.

You know how it feels
to be left with nothing

Good morning beautiful,
awake in the middle of the night no more.
I'm here now, to rest your heart, so sore.
I can't lie,
You'll think of him in the days to come.
But hey, you're gorgeous and we're still young.

I'll be there to carry you home,
when inside you are in pain.
I'll find you, wherever you roam,
To bring you in from the drowning rain.
I'll be there for you,
Yeah these five words are true.
Cause Honey i care for you
I'll be there for you.

Take off the mask,
For i know you hurt.
It is my task,
To teach you a lesson once learnt.

Take every second of every day.
Just forget those times,
You'll find a way.
As you go, read my signs

And know i know how it feels
to be left heartaching, waiting.

The scars,
Your startling nightmares,
awake you to the glow of the stars.
Just dream of how well you'll fare..

Sleep, deam, why'd you get this deep?
Sleep as the crickets sing.

You know how it feels
To be left with nothing.

Good morning beautiful,
awake in the middle of the night no more.
I'm here now, to rest your heart, so sore.
I can't lie,
You'll think of him in the days to come.
But hey, you're gorgeous and we're still young.

I'll be there to carry you home,
when inside you are in pain.
I'll find you, wherever you roam,
To bring you in from the drowning rain.
I'll be there for you,
Yeah these five words are true.
Cause Honey i care for you
I'll be there for you.

You cant make it all alone,
you'll worry of a love that's blown.
You need someone to treat you right,
Gimme a chance, I think I might.
Whenever you are down,
I'll steal away your frown.
Take these words to be true.
I'll be there for you.





can't wait to see what you people think. and be brutally honest, please.

I think it's the hardest thing to write a "sweet" lyric without getting entirely too sacharine, but there are some excellent aspects here. This is one of my favorite parts because in a way it wraps it all up:

Take off the mask,
For i know you hurt.
It is my task,
To teach you a lesson once learnt.

The last line, yeah many times in life we need to relearn something that was lost along the way. I know that all too well.

No major criticisms from me ... I would tweak a few phrases, eliminate a little redundancy, but otherwise I think it's really good