Cold

You’re cold
Icicles form off your bones
Polar bears inside your soul
You’re alone in the tundra
Alone

You’re cold
You try to make a snowman
But it looks just like the reaper
A sign of where you’re heading
You’re so cold

You’re cold
There are still many questions
Like how are you still alive?
Might you really be in hell?
How can this ice make you melt?
You melt

Any thoughts on this or any of my other stuff?

The lyrics in this are good, and change well towards the end, but it's just too short! Plus I can't get a feel for the melody or tempo or anything.. But the lyrics are good, for sure. Keep it up!

I think this one was meant to be a poem, rather than a lyric, but it's hard to know for sure. And I meant it to be short, though I can see why that may turn some people off it.

Excellent thought here SljSlj. I like it a lot. With the right melody if you sing it twice or three times in a row very slowly it could actually make a cool song.

It's nice to see you here.

are you jodyWayne from musicbanter.com? If so, it's great to hear from you again.

Hi SljSlj. Yep it's me. Thank you very much. It's good to see you. I'm still keeping up with your posts via email. You really have been busy. I'm sure all your hard work will pay off when your reddy for it to. Keep up the good work!