Title: Will She Ever Know

I’m walking down this lonely road
With words unsaid, A heart full of love
For a girl that has no idea, Every time I see her
I become more addicted to her like a drug
She runs though my mind everyday
I can’t think of nothing else
Sometime I wonder

(Chorus)
Will she ever know how I feel?
Will I ever have a chance?
To say everything kept inside
To finally let my love for her go
Will she ever know that I love her?
With all my heart and soul
I would die for her if given the chance
Will she ever know!?
I dream of being in her arm
When I wake my poor heart faded
Will she ever know?
(Chorus end)

When I get close to her
My heart starts racing out of control
Hearing her voice steals my breath away
I look at her and I can’t look away
She doesn’t see me
Doesn’t even know I exist
I try so hard to get her to see me
Yet I fail at ever attempt
She carries on her day
Not knowing how insanely in love I am with her

(chorusx2)

I walk this lonely road
The only road I’ve ever known
She will never notice me
Yet I try and try and keep trying
I can’t help what I feel
My heart says she the one
I try to let go
But the feeling is too strong to real

(Chorusx3)

I would change all the her, n she's... N change em to him n he's n sing it all day long thinking of that one boy x) this song is epic.


<3

Good job, I'd really like to hear this as a song. Reminds me of how I felt about my girlfriend before we were dating.

My only issue is that you seem to have stolen lines from a Green Day song (don't remember what it's called) when you said "I walk this lonely road / the only road I've ever known". It's quite possible that it's coincidental, but if it's on purpose, I've got no respect for that, that's the absolute worst thing you can do as a musician.

Also, I don't mean to get in your business, but if you care for her, you should tell her how you feel. Don't wait around forever and end up regretting never trying.

Would you mind reading one of mine I've posted on here and commenting?