Love High

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  1. Tracy-Turnblad's Avatar

    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    The way you move is like a full on rain storm
    And I’m a house of cards
    When your eyes met mine that crowded bar, I
    Fell in love, and I fell so hard
    You stood there in front of me just
    Close enough to touch
    Close enough to hope you wouldn’t see
    what I was thinking of

    So drop everything now
    Meet me in the pouring rain
    Kiss me in the car park
    Take away the pain
    Cuz I’ve been love high
    Since I first saw your smile

    You get me with those brown eyes baby
    as the lights go down
    You give me something that haunts me
    When you’re not around
    Cuz I’ve been love high
    Since I first saw your smile

    You and me walked back together
    I swear I’ve never laughed so much
    You went to leave and I knew I could not
    Let this perfect moment end so I got on your bus

    Cause you turned and looked at me
    And your eyes we’re trying to say
    I just can’t hold my fire and
    Nothing comes to those who wait

    So drop everything now
    Meet me in the pouring rain
    Kiss me in the car park
    Take away the pain
    Cuz I’ve been love high
    Since I first saw your smile

    You get me with those brown eyes baby
    as the lights go down
    You give me something that haunts me
    When you’re not around
    Cuz I’ve been love high
    Since I first saw your smile
     
  2. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

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    This is really good!! Nice sentiment, good edge, smooth flow. Sounds like the kinda thing I listen to!! :P
     
  3. Tracy-Turnblad's Avatar

    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    I changed "When your eyes met mine that crowded bar, I Fell in love, and I fell so hard" to "you're the kind of reckless that should send me running but I kinda knwo that I won't get far"
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Hmm... I like the new lyrics better, methinks
    Last edited by Katie13; 04-05-2011 at 12:39 PM. Reason: accidentally sent before finished typing :P
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Great flow Tracy, it has such an easy feel in reading that I would just love to hear this in song. And the title and signature line, "Cuz I've been love high since I first saw your smile" is just fabulous. I got a perfect image of sitting in a dark-fancy smoke-filled nightclub listening to Michelle Pfieffer singing, lol ... I'm not sure if this is what you had in mind, but that's where it took me, for whatever it's worth. Very nice!
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