Her hair is a swirl of fire burning
Red and orange-yellow; blend majestic
Want inside has slowly left me yearning
No longer am I found apathetic
As I gaze upon this flaming whirlpool
I have begun to find I'm lost at sea
And although I doubt myself, I'm no fool
I find that there's no place I'd rather be
It appears I can't be lost forever
For her eyes would surely guide me back home
I depart from the hair of September
And I'll return back to this world, alone
I look back to catch just one final glance
And pray I haven't missed my only chance
This is the other sonnet. (Beside's apathetic no more) I'm torn on the last line. I want it to be either what it is now or "And pray to God I haven't missed my chance" Idk comments?
Last edited by Inskeepruler; 06-24-2011 at 02:24 AM.