Open Up

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  1. RobberBaron said:

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    Not one of my favourites, this was written for some homework at school. I'll put up the mp3 once I get the nod from my vocalist.

    Open Up - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2011
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    You could be a rock star,
    And drive a flashy car,
    But it makes no difference above,
    If you don't have love

    People know you where you go,
    Stage door before your show,
    All they know is what they see,
    They don't see what's underneath

    Love is patient,
    Love is kind,
    There's no other,
    One in mind

    Take a punch,
    Turn the other cheek,
    But in the end,
    It's not what you really need

    Sometimes in your story,
    You have to make a choice,
    Let the freedom reign,
    Open up again

    Change your outside picture,
    To show what's underneath,
    Let the freedom free,
    And your heart will beat,
    Open up again
    Last edited by RobberBaron; 04-03-2011 at 09:25 AM. Reason: (c) to ©
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Ah, I like it Simple but effective.
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  3. RobberBaron said:

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    We were up late into the night recording. We have so many versions, but the link I added was just a sort of improv one. Hope you like it
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Like it!! Very nice work Your vocalist's got a great quality to her voice.
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  5. RobberBaron said:

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    She's my sister, and on her behalf, thanks! XD She thought the recording went really badly, so she's going to appreciate your comment
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Bless Tell her she's really good, really distinctive The song being real good helps, of course!
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  7. RobberBaron said:

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    Thank you