Lonely

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  1. Zer0's Avatar

    Zer0 said:

    Talking Lonely

    I once had it all,
    Now I'm all alone,
    What I had is gone,
    I'm suddenly feeling cold,
    I know that time is in the past,
    And I'm ready to move on at last,
    There's an empty hole inside of me,
    I need somebody,

    I'm so lonely,
    I need a girl in my life,
    I'm so lonely,
    One that I can make my wife,
    I'm so lonely,
    The one to stay till the end,
    I'm so lonely,
    And who will my best friend,
    I'm so lonely,
    She'll be the better part of me,
    I'm so lonely,

    I know there's a girl out there looking for a guy,
    One to treat her special like she's one of a kind,
    I don't know when I'll find her but until then,
    I'll keep my eyes open just looking ahead,
    Shell be the girl with the sparkle in her eye,
    I'll be the guy who treats her right,
    I don't know when this time will come,
    I hope it's soon because I need someone,

    I'm so lonely,
    I need a girl in my life,
    I'm so lonely,
    One that I can make my wife,
    I'm so lonely,
    The one to stay till the end,
    I'm so lonely,
    And who will my best friend,
    I'm so lonely,
    She'll be the better part of me,
    I'm so lonely,

    I'm alone, and I hate it,
    I need a girl, I need my baby,
    Someone who I can depend and rely on,
    Someone who it takes all my strength to take my eyes off,
    The one for her I'll take a knee,
    The one who will spend their life with me,

    I'm so lonely,
    I need a girl in my life,
    I'm so lonely,
    One that I can make my wife,
    I'm so lonely,
    The one to stay till the end,
    I'm so lonely,
    And who will my best friend,
    I'm so lonely,
    She'll be the better part of me,
    I'm so lonely.
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Awh it's beautiful!!
    I once had it all,
    Now I'm all alone,
    What I had is gone,
    I'm suddenly feeling cold,
    I know that time is in the past,
    And I'm ready to move on at last,
    There's an empty hole inside of me,
    I need somebody,

    fav bit, bro
    Okay I knooooooooow how that feels and when I read that my mind just bursted into flames of "Hey! Remember THIS?!" LoL.
    I like the way you put your rhymes in this one it makes it unique

    I can already find a melody to it now that I've read it twice LoL very good job Zeroo I love the way you wrote this.


    ~Olivia
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  3. Zer0's Avatar

    Zer0 said:

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    Thank you so much. I try to write stuff that other people can relate to so that's great. Thanks.
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Lol well your very good at it Misterrrrr your welcomesssss keep writing songs!!!
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Zer0 said:

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    Appreciate it, will dooo.