Metal let me know how it is.. Everything ends

Has everything came to the end*
The end the human race as we know*
Everything we do has to end*
It time
It time to end it all

Everything we fight for*
Is everything we lost
This is the time
This is the time for it all to end

We made the end come*
We are the solution*
we have to find away*
We have to find away
Or it will be over.

We are the reason the future suffer*
We are the reason no body live
We are the people you hate*
The people that will end it all

No body listens
Know body cares*
As a cry of Justice come*
It will be the end
The end

We made the end come*
We are the solution*
We have to find away*
We have to find away
Or it will be over
*
We made the end come
We are the solution
We have to find away
We have to find away
Away
Away


Now time is up!!!*


Thanks for reading plz comment. If it need something feel free to tell

Hmm... Is English your first language? Idunno if it's how the song is supossed to be but I have a few corrections for yeh
Or it will be ever.
Ever? Or FORever? Hmmmm Lol

N for all the Know body's
Know is for I know this song is awesome
And No is for no I really don't know if your liking me .-.

That's all lol
I really like this song, yes yes I can imagine this as a metal song! Very good ideas in here I'd like to hear this one day in the future. The Beginning pulled me more and more into the song, awesome!! Hahaha great work, keeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing

Lol thanks I put this together in about 5 mins I knew there where a lot of errors in it. I post them just to see if they are good. If they are I finish them, and if they suck I just forget about it. Thank for commenting. And yes English is my first language lol. I just rush to see if it good. Good ideas come fast.

They do don't they? I realized that :3 hahaha Anyways, awesome song and your welcome xP


Olivia-

Yes they do. Thanks again I'm glad it's good

The concept is decent, but I think the execution of it is way too repetitive. It started getting kinda boring hearing about the end and how much we have to find a way. I'm not trying to come across as harsh at all, that's just how it comes across to me. It may also sound different depending on the music it would go to. I think it may be a good idea to change up some of the words that may be overused?