Cold Hearts

Yo, this is my first thread so tell me how i did. I would really appreciate it!

Torn between the dark and light
Is my place of living without emotion,
Waiting for the one that's right,
Obselete of sick and leading notions.

Chorus:
I can't find a way
To melt what's cold inside,
Years of ice that's built upon
The heart that once confided.
Can you find a way
To break into my mind
And show me that it's possible
To keep from going blind?

Gliding over soulless ground,
Hauntingly, you captivate attention.
I can see the life you found
Dripping from
The remnants of convention.

Chorus

It's done. It's over.
I know the way you live.
Now, if I could you know I would,
My cold heart just won't give.
You know I want to but I can't
Because he's in the way.
I'm not alone, your heart's cold too
To think that you could make me say.....

Chorus

You won't find a way
To help me out this time.
Too much ice to make it through
And make me feel compassion.
You can't find a way
Because you're just the same.
We're two cold hearts with different minds.
If only we were the same.

you have a cold heart or should I say warm heart

I like the fact that confided doesnt precisely rhyme with the other word (which ive forgotten because i had to log in to be able to reply, sorry) but it works very well. And the blind thing, yes, sexual innuendo, unless its just me.

Now go back and go into detail as to why my songs are brilli, i mean, review them.