Wait for Help

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  1. Sewn Up's Avatar

    Sewn Up said:

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    This one's an acoustic i wrote recently. Tell me what you think:

    Left alone again
    Before my memories
    Below the life I live
    Inside my reveries
    I want to know the answers
    For security
    I need to find the way
    Again

    Fall away again
    From you and all that's right
    To where I need the lasting
    Evanescent light
    I'm longing for the clarity
    Within my sight
    To help me get away
    Tonight

    Save my life
    All that's gone
    Changes me
    One more time

    All that's gone
    Changes me again
    And all I want
    Is changing me again

    Now I'm waiting for
    The time to come
    For them to come
    And take me home
    Away from here
    Away from pain
    Somewhere I know
    They'll let me live

    Let me live
     
  2. Mz.Chocolate said:

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    you waiting for help yea well here's all the help you can get and more
     
  3. pq92k said:

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    I really enjoyed reading these set of lyrics. The flow of words you created is like warm, clean water running through my hands on a chilly spring day. The second block of words is very well-written. I really like the lines "And all I want/Is changing me again".