Don't Go

Another 30-second wonder? No not a "wonder" at all, but it's another speed-write, if 5-6 minutes can be called "speed". Medium-slow beat but kinda crisp on enunciations, and several pauses in the music between verses, bridges, etc.

Thanks to Katie and robberbaron for the inspiration, your lyrics plus random comments

Please Don't Go

I miss you more
Than I ever said
Coz you want my heart
to be "dead" to you
Coz I thought 1-and-1
Was more than two
Coz I couldn't believe
What you said was true

So why do I
Still sing this song
When time and again
You said I'm wrong
To love you with
Each breath I take
Since I didn't believe
Your words weren't fake

Well I sing

Because ...

You beat my heart
And breathe my soul
Without your love
I'm frozen cold
I can't even move
You own me so
I'm zero minus you
So ...

Please. don't. go

Please-don't-go

(instr.)

I want to see
You smile again
And tell me how
Your morning went
I just don't care
What went before
I only want
To love you more

Because ...

You beat my heart
And breathe my soul
Without your love
I'm frozen cold
I can't even move
You own me so
I'm zero minus you
So ...

Please. don't. go

Please-don't-go

(instr.)

I'll hide it well
If you'll just stay
There's nothing left
For me to say
I only want
Your love again
Insane I know
But please, don't, go

Because ...

You beat my heart
And breathe my soul
Without your love
I'm frozen cold
I can't even move
You own me so
I'm zero minus you
So please don't go

Just please don't go

Please don't go

(...)

~.~

I particularly love this bit "I want to see
You smile again
And tell me how
Your morning went
I just don't care
What went before
I only want
To love you more"

I know you already have a name for this, but I was wondering if "Zero Minus You" would be a good name?

I like this... it's full of longing and the lyrics are great

Thanks both of you and I'm always really pleased when something can come out so simple. And RB, about the title, obviously I was confused coz I gave it 2 slightly different names lol ... I wonder if "Zero Minus You" might be a bit too campy-theatrical or something, but what about just "Zero Minus" or just "Zero" .... I dunno, I might need to pull out my dart board for this one