Verbal Needs

I hit with lyrics as if other lyricists don't exist
Gifted with tricks for the spirit, oh I'm exquisite
Thought I'd take a shot at Hiphop, 'cuz I know that I'm hot
I'm everything u're not plus I got soul & I got

My mental artillery to kill it with every verse
& My lyrical ability to fit in every word
I know this is a virtual world
But it shows that I'm a verbal girl

Flirt with words like I'm the meanest nerd on earth
I get dirty with verbs & I'm the first to give birth
To a verse that is worth reading without hearing the beat
Ya heard me, I got the feeling I need to be real

And what's greater than a paper and a pen ?
My flavour for mental labor has no end
So whatever happens, just think again
As long as I'm rappin', the ink remains my friend ...

Oh, I exist, I'm the Alpha and Omega, the first and the last, the beginning of your end
Your caught in a world of make-believe, pretend
Nah, I ain't trying to offend, I wanna be your friend
But I gotta defend, let ya know I can contend

Yeah, you got flavor I could savor, I wanna be your savior
I dig that bad girl behavior, want some now and later
See I ain't tryin' to be a hater
It's set to stun on my phaser

I see you got ability, so I'll deal with you civilly
Woo you with my chivalry, and mad flow imagery
Maybe get with you physically, make you have an epiphany
Become part of my ministry, I'll be your divinity from now to infinity

If you ain't feeling me, willingly, and get at me critically
You'd be killing me unwittingly
I'll still be here spitting see, now it's written
That's a promise, i do guarantee

I don't need no savior, it would mean I'm a failure
Guess it's in a man's nature, so I'll stress about it later
I'm a lover, not a hater,
So discover my basis

'Cuz I hate wastin' phrases & pages full of greatness
on tasteless behaviour & aimless faintness
Yet I'm sure that u score on how to handle a dame
Praised be the Lord, not all men are the same

And your chivalry is brilliantly different, see,
You deliver me chills and it's instantly
Wanna get with me physically, imagine me get it hot
In all simplicity: I'm the one on top

Do me lyrically and I'll instinctually feel
If u're the type for me,'cuz I'm distinctly real
So if you feelin' me, ayo I'm feelin' you too
I'm the real deal, now u need to make a move

Damn Molotova you are gifted there is no question about that.
I like how you stack them word girl. good job.... Please keep dropping.
Cash you hold your own as well. You may not know me Cause I'm the new guy aswell.
I also rap and wright lyrics. I have dman near five finnished songs I need
feed back on. I'm not your typical emcee. I speak of matters that need attention in the world.
but don't get me wrong I can through some nasty battles out there. lol
maybee one day we could have a friendly battle some day...

Peace Love & Empathy

Sk'nDeep

Hi Skin,

Thx for the props, I like some of your work too. Where are you from if I may ask ?
I'll get back to you in the other battle when I have some more time, I like to take my time when I write.

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Jacksonvile Florida. Where the hate grows in people day by day.
It's hard to get a name out here. I take a while on my songs as well. Perfection is key.

I agree with Skin. Youre very talented, Molotova! Just like you and Skin, im also new to ATL. Maybe you could give me some feedback on my first piece posted in the forum under Hello and Help! ?

I see you waiting patiently, your mind wanders
And you think of me and wonder where can I be
I hear you saying "I'm tired of wack MC's tryin' to get at me"
I'm back, here to set you free from the haters and the wanna be's

Yeah your fine, but I'm more attracted to your mind
your lines are one of a kind
so blow the stop sign and crash into my rhymes
We got everyone else sounding like a clown as$ mime

they should make it a crime the way I stop time w my dope rhymes
See our life is a blink of an eye, a lesson of time that can be quite perplexing*
But see we got this connection

so just follow my directions*and you'll find mad affection
If love is a disease, I got a full blown infection
I'll look deep in your iris and deliver the virus
*make you my queen like the days of papyrus

Oh let's have mind sex like Dead Prez describes best
I flex in a million positions if you'd like to test
Next time, take no rest 'cuz I'll release the stress
My side-effects might make you feel impressed

Guys fall for me and it ain't like I trip 'em
I'm all into thee and if you're the crime, I'm the victim
Glad to see u here C., welcome back, I've had it with the others
They so mad they feel me yet attack and I don't even bother

You say you'll make me your queen so I'm down with the king
Let the haters feel free to come around and do their thing
As long as we're lovers, our lyrical passion's everlasting
Imagine us on every cover, our critical reactions are blastin'

If love is a disease, baby I'll be your nurse, sssshhhtt
'Cuz I'm here to please, this lady brings you ill versessss
Now let's go to sleep for our thoughts to get peace
You know I'll keep your memory safe 'cuz sometimes u disappear ...

Yea ur very talented, u can twist the lyrics to suit ur own. Very good indeed and once u fink about it very dirty too just like me lol, so id give u thumbs up on that 1 and cash lmfao!

Thx a lot, this is just stuff I freestyled though, nothing serious or anything.
But I appreciate the feedback a lot ! If I understood correctly, you're a chick ?
WELCOME TO THE RAP LYRICS REVIEW ! For more than a year I've been the only chick around here, I'd like to see another girl that can keep up with these guys.

Nice stuff!
Especially for freestyling. Props.