Armor of Chains - Knight of Darkened Light

Based on Drewth, the main protagonist of The Knight of Darkened Light:

http://www.wix.com/2dark4light/esperynzia
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/19244

ARMOR OF CHAINS ~

~ KNIGHT OF DARKENED LIGHT

It’s all over
She lay still forever
Heavy in death
Cold last breath
It’s all over
I’ve got no where to go
It happened so fast
Time drags it on painfully slow
It’s all over
Over for you
My rampage within comes through
For what you’ll never undo
Run, Run, I
Run, Run, on
With cold steel as cold as I feel
Blood, blood, your
Blood, blood, is
All I seek to quench my raging grief
I’m a knight of darkened light
Within and without I fight
Endlessly
Where is the key
I need release for what is left inside of me
I’m too dark for light
Off the path I lead
I need to see inside of me
Where is the light
When it’s too dark for light

you want to tell me who I am now
because I can't speak anymore
and in my crimson silence
in which I sleep awake in nightmare
I lose control of my soul
this struggling love transformed to uncontained hate
which starves for Syndirin's blood, a hunger only he can sate

Before I explode in pain
I bear this black armor of chains
which contains me
and what life is sealed within - it drains me

Don't ask what I am now
I don't know

Where my sword seeks her murderer
I will go

I am tainted with inner scars too ugly to see

After I let him of his evil life
then just let what remains of me be

Run, Run, I
Run, Run, on
With cold steel as cold as I feel
Blood, blood, your
Blood, blood, is
All I seek to quench my raging grief
I’m a knight of darkened light
Within and without I fight
Endlessly
Forsake the key
I hold on to what is left locked inside of me
Or am I now the dark that's too dark for light

LEAD SINGER - MALE VOICE: represents Drewth, the Knight
HIM/HE/YOU/YOUR: refers to his enemy
SHE/HER(the female reference): refers to Drewth's slain love

feedback...feedback!

:-)

Andrew

It reminds me of those old folk tales sung by a fire in the old Medieval times.

-Nanashi-

I still thinks its great how you write these to further interpret your stories in the characters emotions.

-Joshua-

:-) thanks, also glad you enjoyed it

if I could categorize the genre of the music, it would be something like dark metal, not really heavy metal. Like a blend of the powerful song styles with the slow song styles of Metallica, but not limited to just 2 guitars and a drumset instrament-wise, and no angry screaming type of singing, except maybe for the "RUN, RUN, I RUN RUN ON". maybe if Metallica was colored up with Evanescence - something toward that.

I couldn't name a band to do it, though, like I could name a band for Nightmare Princess.

Hell, maybe I'll do it myself - that'd be fun...

hey, would you mind leaving a poll on this one and Nightmare Princess? Just to get it started...it's pretty lame that I request it but I wish I had the poll up before you viewed these two, I only put up poll today. Anyway, if you get a chance...

Andrew

Of course~

appreciated - again sorry for the after-the-fact aspect of my request...

Do not worry about that. It is no problem at all~ I rather like the idea of interest in other song writers opinions.

-Nanashi-

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