Song of Farewell

I’m going to sail away,
Far away across the sea,
Maybe when I return,
You’ll be here waiting for me,

I’m going to cross the skies,
Fly and soar so far above,
To the sunset and then return,
In case I’ve gained your love,

I’ll wait for forever and a day,
They can say impossible,
I’m gonna find a way,

So this is my goodbye song,
Because I’m told you only miss the water when it’s gone,
I’ll come back when you realise,
That what you needed was right before your eyes,
And your heart’s ready to tell,
Till then I’m just going to sing my song of farewell,

I’ll see lands of wonder,
See things that can’t be true,
Though I know in my heart,
They won’t compare to you,

I’ll meet dashing, fearless princes,
Warriors, people set apart,
I’ll smile and look to the dawn,
At the boy who holds my heart,

I’ll wait for forever and a day,
They can say impossible,
I’m gonna find a way,

So this is my goodbye song,
Because I’m told you only miss the water when it’s gone,
I’ll come back when you realise,
That what you needed was right before your eyes,
And your heart’s ready to tell,
Till then I’m just going to sing my song of farewell,

I’d put myself through hell for you,
Dance my way through flames for you,
I’d dive to the bottom of the sea,
I’d climb the mountains tall for you,
Face the sands of time for you,
And hope that maybe,
Just maybe,

This is my goodbye song,
Because I’m told you only miss the water when it’s gone,
I’ll come back when you realise,
That what you needed was right before your eyes,
And your heart’s ready to tell,
Till then I’m just going to sing my song of farewell,

Tryking's rap
15 Guyed Girl
(Verse 1)I met a girl/don’t know I like/don’t know I love/it didn’t hurt per guy she meet/but it’s not a lie/if I say when she’s away it hurts/and she got fifteen clean and dirty boy friends/and that pretty girl made my heat turn for a lot/with her it’s like I won a lottery/and even in my launder/I see your face on my whit shirt/and I knew no girl like you is on the earth/in this universe/thank god she placed in my class/when I see your face/but she’s got fifteen guys/and she might say bye/if I ask her out/so I kept my mouth shut/she got fifteen guys/some of them are though and ruff/I hope none of them got cuffs/and I don’t is this enough/don’t know am I in love/don’t know am I though/or is my love just lust/cuz if I say I’m in love/I could just be the biggest fool of them all/I’m pushed against the wall/when she says I’m leaving it all/all that I got in my school/I’m not cool with it/forgive me if I act ruled/I don’t wanna drool/but it would be crud rude and maybe greedy if I ask you to be with me/I know I’m not clean any more/but I don’t watch porn/and I never felt this away about a girl/never heart went melt/don’t tell me what this is/I should have been a man/not a tramp/a man/take a chance/ask you out/tell it loud

(Chorus) she’s a fifteen guyed girl/make you produce water/and make you get hotter/but don’t bother/cuz your not goanna get her/she’s a fifteen guyed girl/make you produce water/and make you get hotter/but don’t bother/cuz your not goanna get her

(Verse 2) remember the good times we had/and how bad we had fun in the class/sorry I didn’t ask you out/sorry I didn’t open my mouth/I was just a cowherd/now I’ve not herd from you again/let me in/not knowing do you feel the pain/it drains my soul/everything I told/makes me close to the loss/and in the process/I think I lost it/and I don’t expect you or who/to love me as much/even thought are heart touched/maybe not as much/I should have asked you for lunch/I guess I hate my self too much/but I love you as much/do know is it enough/but I have a hunch/if I ask you out now/you could say wow/and say yes/could be for the best/I should think less/cuz in my mined you say no/and through me down/no crowed to stop me now/from going down/and I won’t get crowned/for romantic/but the clocks are ticking/so I’ll think less/and ask you out/finally/ask you out

(Chorus) she’s a fifteen guyed girl/make you produce water/and make you get hotter/but don’t bother/cuz your not goanna get her/she’s a fifteen guyed girl/make you produce water/and make you get hotter/but don’t bother/cuz your not goanna get her

Um, not quite sure why you've posted that on this thread... did you mean to start a new one?

so how do you like i?

It's alright... but I'd prefer it if you hadn't posted it here!!! Try opening a new thread, you'd get more responses.
Nah, it's good but I'm not a rap type of person, so I can't critique...